Comments | superhappynao: Paint (Subassan Oneshot Part 2)

superhappynao

Paint (Subassan Oneshot Part 2)

May 18, 2011 01:43

He smoked and drank so much that whatever parts of his body that had any ounce of feeling in them before the night had turned completely and utterly numb. He knew that Yasu had a far lower tolerance than he did, and every time he looked round to check on his friend he was staring into space. They hadn’t talked for something like an ( Read more... )

subassan, oneshot, paint

Comments 9

kyun_spark May 19 2011, 14:20:00 UTC

aaaah... angst..love it.. <3 thank youu

superhappynao May 24 2011, 19:27:26 UTC

:) Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it :3

redturtleotaku May 19 2011, 22:01:52 UTC

Wow this is very heavy and quite unusual. I'm impressed though, especially with the second part. You really showed how warped Subaru's thinking became and how easy it is to just lose it and forget what's really important. You totally deserve more comments and love for this missy! A big well done and a hug!

superhappynao May 24 2011, 19:28:57 UTC

Heavy and unusual?! That sounds crazy! But my kind of crazy, so I'm happy xD thank you for this and the well done! I honestly didn't think it was anything good... just something I wanted to finish and got me all riled up and stuff!

brzooska May 20 2011, 09:27:25 UTC

It was really great fic. After I read it, I couldn't get it out from my head. It felt so real, it made me sad for the rest of the day, but not because I didn't like it, but rather cause I was thinking a lot about it xD
Really wonderful work! <3

superhappynao May 24 2011, 19:30:37 UTC

Wow, I'm glad it had such an effect! I honestly never thought this was a very good fic... xD Thank you so much for reading it and commenting, I haven't had such nice comments in a while, so I must be doing something right!

brzooska May 24 2011, 19:47:15 UTC

It was really, really good! I honestly spend whole evening thinking about this fic XD
I'll be looking forward to your other fics (if you write any ;D).

xxcloud9 May 20 2011, 19:39:36 UTC

I think you did a really good job with the emotions on this one. I could picture everything so clearly and feel for all the characters involved.

Subaru really dug himself deep :/, but the ending is hopeful. :)

I enjoyed this :D.

Thanks for sharing.

superhappynao May 24 2011, 19:32:15 UTC

Thank you so much :) I honestly didn't think it had described the emotions of the characters so well, but I'm glad people say otherwise.
Thank you even more for reading and commenting! It means a lot to me, and I'm very glad you liked it