Comic: Your Heart on The Line pg 012-014

[superpoof]

Ugh I'm doing this on a snails pace, ugh ugh ugh.

Comments

[epithalamium]

The second page is so quiet, I just loved it. And that panel with their crushed cigarette butts...

[superpoof]

Glad you like it babe! <3

[remuslives23]

I, too, love the panel with the cigarette butts. :)

[superpoof]

Glad you like that simple drawing of two cigarette butts! <3

[eprime]

Lovely, as usual! It's cool the way you're able to pace everything so well using just images. :)

[superpoof]

Thanks, I constantly think about this comic and how to make it as cool as your original fic without getting too much stuff cut out, I'm just happy to do this <3 <3 really really glad you like it!

[mysid]

It may seem a strange choice, but I adored the panel with the cigarette butts. Coming after the page of smoking without dialouge, it continues the mood of quiet companionship, and it establishes how long they did sit there in silence. It also implies that they are staring at the ground while they speak--in other words, it's a conversion they find easier to begin if they aren't looking at one another.

The entire comic has wonderful pacing and shows that you've made great choices for moments/dialouge to illustrate.

[superpoof]

thanks, I had some other option for that particular panel, but I choose the cigarette butts to draw because I've always wanted to draw that kind of scene <3