Comments | superpoof: comic: Your Heart on the Line Ch 2 pg 1-2

superpoof

comic: Your Heart on the Line Ch 2 pg 1-2

Feb 26, 2011 23:04

yyyeah, I planned to do a big 6 pages update but I'm still not too happy with pages 3-6 so big update cancelled. My mind is jumping all over the place (and not in a healthy way, unfortunately) :/ please enjoy the small update still.

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comic, sirius/remus, harry potter, your heart on the line, b/w

Comments 21

epithalamium February 27 2011, 02:06:31 UTC

Eeeh, new pages! And they look different this time, somehow. The screen tones are darker?

Also, I know Moony probably feels shite and all, but he does look so jumpable it's not even fair. XD

superpoof February 28 2011, 14:25:53 UTC

Yes! It's supposed to be night scene so I kind of got all out with the blacks and tones xD (tho I'm trying a different kind of inking and toning style lately, too)

thankyou! xD I was trying really hard not to be frustrated while drawing him, so it's nice that you find him jumpable haha

inverts February 27 2011, 03:59:58 UTC

MMMMM
Shirtless boys AND heavy blacks! I am in love! ♥
That top panel on the first page is my favourite, what a great start~

Oh goodness, is Remus without pants as well!? 8D

superpoof February 28 2011, 14:27:15 UTC

thankyouuu! ^^ yes I think the blacks are too much now? teheee

and YES he's without pants! So we can easily ravish him as he is in our heads xD!

inverts March 1 2011, 01:59:38 UTC

yes I think the blacks are too much now?

NO SUCH THING AS TOO MANY BLACKS

well okay that's not true. but. You have definitely not crossed the line to too many blacks!

superpoof March 2 2011, 12:25:06 UTC

There are certainly a lot of Blacks in the Black family (whatt???), I digress. xD

eprime February 27 2011, 05:48:58 UTC

I agree with epithalamium--Moony does look jumpable here. ;)

So excited to see this!

superpoof February 28 2011, 14:28:39 UTC

Thankyouuu! <3 You're the person that kept me going xP

(nah, I'm in all out Sirius/Remus mode lately) xD

deathjunke February 27 2011, 15:27:10 UTC

Oh! Post moon Remus is darling! *snuggles Remus*

superpoof February 28 2011, 14:29:01 UTC

awww, *gives him to you* <3 thankyou!

nogah February 27 2011, 19:52:55 UTC

Hello! I've been silently following this charming work in progress, thought I'd finally drop a comment. I'm delighted to see an update. I think your boys are refreshingly boyish and yet there's something subtle and beautiful about your work, both the art and the text. I'm already waiting for the next piece!

superpoof February 28 2011, 14:33:23 UTC

Ah, I wish that more people like you could leave a comment (I've tempted to lock my comics several times just to see how much people read it, but then figured that it won't be fair) haha :P

I'm really happy and thankyou for the nice compliments <3 I'm really sorry for the lame 2 page update (I did that because it's been a long time since I submit anything and I'm stuck with the other pages so yeah)

I won't let you wait too long this time <3

thanks again!

nogah March 1 2011, 13:11:02 UTC

I usually leave comments if I like something, I don't know what was wrong with me this time! Especially if I see the author/artist replies.

Don't be sorry! The new pages are so lovely. Remus looks wonderful, even if it's not fair to look so beautiful when he's feeling so down. Take your time, post when you're happy with your work. It's about the quality more then the quantity, no? People are willing to wait for something good ♥

I think I'll friend you so I wouldn't miss it, though. Hope that's all right with you :)

superpoof March 2 2011, 12:15:35 UTC

thankyou very much! <3 and of course it's ok to friend me, I don't really have a reject friends policy <3