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SPS - 8:15

Feb 04, 2007 20:13

Title: "One onto the Other"
Author: mrsronweasley
Fandom: due South
Pairing: F/K
Rating: NC-17, naturally
Notes: With enormous thanks to kristiinthedark and strangecobwebs for such quick and last minute betas! ♥ (785 words)

( One onto the Other )

Comments 33

shayheyred February 5 2007, 01:45:51 UTC

Um, yeah.
::fans self::
This is mighty fine.

mrsronweasley February 5 2007, 15:05:31 UTC

Yay, thank you! :D

ruthless1 February 5 2007, 02:00:12 UTC

Nice alternative to the Superbowl!

mrsronweasley February 5 2007, 15:05:44 UTC

Awesome! :D

brooklinegirl February 5 2007, 02:09:43 UTC

he had always imagined doing. He saw himself touching the person, imagined the way his fingers would move on unfamiliar skin, the way he would lick and mouth it, the way he would bring that person to the very brink with his own body. He only belatedly realized that he never truly thought about how that person would make him feel in return.

oh, oh, I LOVE that! I GET that! and it's SUCH a Fraser thing, such a totally Fraser way to THINK, and I love that you got it written there so eloquently. I love how CAUGHT UP Fraser is in this whole thing, and how Ray pushes him here, pushes all his buttons, until Fraser just has to GIVE, you know?

Lovely!

mrsronweasley February 5 2007, 15:10:35 UTC

See, now I'm just laughing about it now. Hi. :P But yes, Ray has to just KEEP HIM there, and eventually, Fraser will get the point. *g*

Thank youuuu! ♥

omphale23 February 5 2007, 04:42:50 UTC

Ray entered him in one slow stroke, and that was the last time Fraser felt even in the least bit coherent.

Coherent? Totally overrated. Incoherent Fraser is made entirely of WIN.

*looks about in a daze*

Superbowl? What Superbowl?

mrsronweasley February 5 2007, 15:11:12 UTC

Totally overrated, you're right. I love Fraser best when he's thisclose to out of his mind. *g*

Thaaaank you! :)

slidellra February 5 2007, 04:46:12 UTC

Oh, man. This is all hot, but this bit

They scrambled, and if Fraser hadn’t actually acted out this particular scenario in his mind, he was certainly no stranger to trying to predict Ray’s next move. He was unsurprised when Ray broke off their kiss, hands braced on either side of Fraser’s head, and looked him in the eye, cheeks flushed and mouth glistening.

got to me something fierce. Wonderful!

mrsronweasley February 5 2007, 15:11:27 UTC

I'm so glad! Thank you! :D