Comments | superquarky: Reposting updated resume

superquarky

Reposting updated resume

Feb 23, 2009 09:50

I've only posted what I changed. So the objective is more polite and pointless now, but hopefully looks less desperate. I added a line to the PA work, and also the temp agency's names. I'm not taking out RIT ( Read more... )

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sharonlover February 23 2009, 17:27:10 UTC

out of curiosity...what's a 'face-paced' organization? You need some work on the objective...I don't think it's descriptive enough of what you are looking for. What are some of your qualities that would make you a good person to this company?

"Seeking an administrative position to contribute to a face-paced organization."

Example: (which sounds horrible but you get the picture).

Seeking an administrative position in a fast paced organization utilizing my organizational and computer skills to provide quick and efficient support.

Mine goes:

Seeking a management position in the challenging and growing IT field utilizing my skills in computers and networks to promote expedient service to customers through customer friendly service and knowledgeable technicians.

Everything else looks pretty good though.
hope that helps a little.

superquarky February 23 2009, 19:48:12 UTC

Oh! I'm an idiot! I did that same grammar mistake yesterday! Why? Why do I want to say fast and it comes out face? Too much A-Team?? O.o

Yeah, and I'm totally stealing that, yes. That's what I was looking for! Boring yet it tells about ME! Yay!

Seeking an administrative position in a fast paced company utilizing my organizational and computer skills to provide quick and efficient support with a smile.

I had to add smile or friendly service or something in there tho. I'm too cheerful not to.

Thank you SO MUCH! I feel better about distributing this one now.

sharonlover February 23 2009, 21:18:03 UTC

no problem ^_^; resumes are a pain in the ass and I found that the 'objective' always sounds good when it's in that type of structure...that's what the websites say too.

and maybe you subconscious is trying to type face-palm :P

good luck :)

gnea February 24 2009, 00:23:23 UTC

Ooo, I like. Yes, much better. :)

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