Paisley's Doctor Who Epic Birthday Story (part one)

[supersharmie]

I will eventually post this to OWR, once we decide where it should fit and if it should be cannon (it shouldn't). For now, here's the story for anyone who wants to read it

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[cws_eat_chs]

You had me bantering with the Doctor. Bantering. With the Doctor. Are you sure this isn’t MY birthday story? ;D

‘John looked from Leah to the Doctor and…’ That makes me think, “Rocky!” “Dr. Scott!” etc.

“Leah’s the one who understands when I speak!” Haha, and so is John but it’s too awkward to talk to him.

‘“Shut it,” said Leah flippantly’ I think it’s obvious who wears the pants…

‘“I’m going to see,” said John, going out the back door.’ No! John! Haven’t I taught you ANYTHING about Doctor Who? Or zombie movies?

I’d like to mention how much I LOVE your pseudo-science.

“He was so adverse to a tumble with you and me, I figured he couldn’t be attracted to him and not me.” LOLOLOLOLOL BEST LINE EVAR. The Doctor is secretly hurt, not disgusted about the whole Master fiasco. Brilliant. Okay, that line and the “sarcastically reaching across you at dinner” line. That one’s fantastic.

Should be “Allons-y”. French stuff.

This is so great because it’s clearly a real episode. Are you up yet? CALL ME. READ ME THE REST.

[supersharmie]

Haha, yes, I couldn't remember if it was Allonsy or Allonsie so I picked one. Will fix later.

I figured Doctor-Leah banter would amuse Paisley, so I went for it. :) There is also some straight up good stuff for Paisley, sooo...

Yeah, also John was looking for an excuse to leave cause he is so awkward with just the three of them. He also apparently sometimes has poor judgement, haha.

my pseudo-science is infallible! i like it. i'm glad you do too.

Of course the Doctor is hurt! He thinks he's sexysexysexy. :)

i am awake. and it is done. but i have to wait to read it to paisley first. i will tell you it's 17 pages in total, though... :) so. later. promise!

[cws_eat_chs]

No, specifically, "allons-y" exactly like that. With the hyphen. French stuff.

[theanswer42]

Now who's correcting French, Miss I-Don't-Need-French. Or whatever you said. Can't be arsed to look now. Don't particularly care.

[theanswer42]

I expect a printed and bound copy on my desk by Thursday.

[supersharmie]

DONE!

[alexthai]

Interesting!

[theanswer42]

You should post the rest of this. hint hint.