i wrote a poem.. take from it what you will... okay

Mar 11, 2006 22:13


I once wrote a poem.
Full of similes and
Metaphors
Comparing her beauty to
The crashing of the waves and the
Way sun radiates in her presence
The poem was mediocre at best but
It was the very best then.

I once wrote a story.
Centered on the never ending
Moment when I met her
Using words of description
To detail the shadow her
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candikurlz March 12 2006, 04:05:37 UTC
beautiful

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suport_love March 12 2006, 14:41:13 UTC
thank you!! so you liked it? i wasnt sure how i felt about it now i like it a lot
have a good one ♥

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