fanfic: folded, unfolded, unfolding

Jul 12, 2008 15:37

Type; Fanfic / fanmix
Fandom; Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Title; Folded, Unfolded, Unfolding
Characters; Buffy, Angelus
Pairings; Buffy/Angel, Buffy/Angelus
Rating; R. Want a light, fluffy piece? This isn't the one.
Disclaimer; I own nothing. Unfortunately.
Summary; Buffy hates Angelus. Buffy loves the vampire he once was. Where does the line start ( Read more... )

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agent_popsicle July 12 2008, 21:06:06 UTC
I loved this the first time I read it, I love it now. It's bitter and harsh and heart wrenching and everything Buffy/Angelus should be.

Thank you for posting! You're a beautiful writer, Char.

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supportmybones July 12 2008, 21:52:25 UTC
god, i love you so very much. you always make me feel so awesome. ;D

you are definitely the cheese to my macaroni. without the cheese, you just get the macaroni, and everyone knows that's no good. it would be bland!

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dream_infinity0 July 12 2008, 21:47:05 UTC
love the story...but i love angel/buffy better.....

great song list, perfect for them two

great work

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supportmybones July 12 2008, 21:54:46 UTC
thank you. ;] i also love angel/buffy better, but angelus/buffy runs a close second. i'm a sucker for angel/buffy. they'll always be my one true pairing.

again, thank you for the comment. ;D

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tigre86 July 12 2008, 23:11:56 UTC
This was so heartwrenching and harsh, just as I imagined Buffy/Angelus would be and the way she felt on the show when Angel was gone. I especially loved the section describing Buffy and Angel's first time, I can picture all those little things going on in their minds in that moment so it was just perfect. Beautifully written.

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supportmybones July 12 2008, 23:25:55 UTC
Thank you so much! It's comments like these that make me want to keep writing. I was especially nervous with this piece, since it was my first.

Thank you again for the beautiful compliment! ;D

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tigre86 July 13 2008, 16:11:57 UTC
You're welcome! Definitely keep writing, I'd love to see more from you. I'm actually really curious as to how the whole thing with Angelus/Buffy started, so if you ever want to expand on that, I'd love to see it. :D

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naika7 July 13 2008, 00:58:21 UTC
Heartbreaking ))) and beautiful.

Buffy/Angel are the pairing of a lifetime! )))

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supportmybones July 13 2008, 01:03:07 UTC
thank you so much!

and i totally agree about buffy/angel! i love them more than any other pairing ever!

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dreamincolor July 13 2008, 03:34:37 UTC
Ouch.

Great job digging into Angelus's mind. (And goodness knows, it's a scary place in there!) This whole piece was wonderfully -or terribly- dark, and beautifully written, especially the scene of their first time in contrast to their time together in the present.

Very nice.

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supportmybones July 13 2008, 03:39:50 UTC
Thank you so, so much! I had a harder time with Angelus, due to just how twisted he really is. I actually role play as Buffy, so I felt like I had a grip on her. It was just Angelus I was worried about. So, your feedback makes me feel a lot better!

Thank you again for the awesome comment! I really do appreciate it. ;D

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dreamincolor July 13 2008, 04:13:13 UTC
My pleasure. :D This piece is practically radiating talent, so I do hope you keep writing!

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supportmybones July 13 2008, 04:17:35 UTC
This piece is practically radiating talent, so I do hope you keep writing!

Whoever you are, you just made my day. :D Btw, do you mind if I add your personal account? I'm always looking for more friends who love the Buffyverse. ;D

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