fanfic: folded, unfolded, unfolding
Type; Fanfic / fanmix
Fandom; Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Title; Folded, Unfolded, Unfolding
Characters; Buffy, Angelus
Pairings; Buffy/Angel, Buffy/Angelus
Rating; R. Want a light, fluffy piece? This isn't the one.
Disclaimer; I own nothing. Unfortunately.
Summary; Buffy hates Angelus. Buffy loves the vampire he once was. Where does the line start ( Read more... )
Fandom; Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Title; Folded, Unfolded, Unfolding
Characters; Buffy, Angelus
Pairings; Buffy/Angel, Buffy/Angelus
Rating; R. Want a light, fluffy piece? This isn't the one.
Disclaimer; I own nothing. Unfortunately.
Summary; Buffy hates Angelus. Buffy loves the vampire he once was. Where does the line start ( Read more... )
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"If he could have, he would have bottled up each and every one of her precious tears." ... so intense and overwhelming!
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I also liked this piece. I am glad that you chose not to write Angelus as some poor, misunderstood puppy- because he's certainly not that.
There were lots of bits of this I liked:
She could tell him to stop until her voice was cracked, and her throat raw ( had done it, on occasion ), but it wouldn't do any good. Not for her. Never for her. The outcome was always the same.
"Make me."
This bit establishes the characters beautifully and lets us know we are in the presence of evil.
If you irritate a wound long enough, the nerves die.
A line like this, isolated as this one was, carries a lot more weight. You could have easily left out some of the stuff that came before it and the reader's imagination would have been going crazy wondering what he'd been doing to her. *g*
Angelus loved this part. He loved watching her stumble back to her house, try to scrub away bruises that seemed to refuse to fade, and collapse onto her bed in a useless heap. Breaking the will was always the best part. Again, this is a great character ( ... )
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And btw i love the music !!!
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lulz. thank you so much, bb. :D
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