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I Want To Cry [Poem/Rap/Song-Fiction] ~JayWoo (By Me)

Dec 13, 2010 22:26

~ I Want To Cry ~
[Song-Fiction/ Rap/ Poem]
Written By Ruby KhunTaecWooChanHoSu (Me)
(Based on Brave Brothers & Jay Park’s song ‘I Want To Cry’)

[Character(s)/Pairing: Jaebeom, Wooyoung, JayWoo]

I want to cry
Because I love you so much
I want to cry
Because you’re the only one my heart wants

Not even want
There’s no word for this feeling
This aching in my ( Read more... )

i want to cry, 2pm, song-fiction, wooyoung, korean pop, what if, jaebeom, kate winslet, i was crazy over you, brave brothers, tell me goodbye, beast/b2st, big bang, jaywoo pairing, k-pop, jay park, i can't, break down

Comments 20

yeahprettyboy December 14 2010, 02:50:47 UTC

(it's been ages since i've read jaywoo and i miss this pairing so much!)

it's my first time reading something like this and wow. just wow. so many emotions are conveyed through few words. and as can almost hear jay rapping/singing this as i read it.

i'm really really look forward to reading more of your work. post more!

and a side note, i'm so pumped for gd&top's comeback as well!!

WHOOOOO HEYYY MY FELLOW GD & T.O.P'S COMBACK SPAZZING BUDDY!!! <3 LOOOL suprshineepmbng December 14 2010, 12:20:20 UTC

OKAY THAT 'SUBJECT' MAKES NO SENSE IKR?!!..GOD KNOWS HOW I GET GOOD GRADES IN ENGLISH WHEN HALF THE TIME I'M TALKING IN JIBBERISH LMAO xDD.

Anyway first, Thank You for reading & commenting BB!!!. Your my FIRST commenter, so YAYYY, I love youuu Hahahaa! <3. Yuss I totally agree, the world is so deprived of JayWoo fics these days, it's ridiculous, and yuhh I miss this pairing much too!!! *Waa Ang Ang Jing* xP. Awwh your compliments have got me smiling ear to ear Loool, Thank you!. It's my first time writing something like this too, I'm not really a poem writing kinda person, like I don't write much, but this just popped out of nowhere!. Seriously It wrote it self, before I knew it I had 4 pages written like 'Whoaa wheredid you come from' hehe. And yuhhh you're just like me, I could totally hear Jay rapping & singing this, that's why I made him the main character!, his voice is just DAMN BEAUTIFUL in the actual song 'I want to cry ( ... )

Re: WHOOOOO HEYYY MY FELLOW GD & T.O.P'S COMBACK SPAZZING BUDDY!!! <3 LOOOL yeahprettyboy December 15 2010, 01:47:09 UTC

your reply is the cutest!

ahahahah, i took your comment virginity and i like it. lol, what am i on about?

i knowwwwww, jay's voice is amazing /melts into a puddle of goo.

flop? are you kidding me? i read your poem/rap in bed on my ipod and it was so good i had to turn my computer on and comment. i swear, i always ceebs commenting, but i commented this time!

i loveeeeeee khunyoung and chanho! seriously, i'll read anything you write. do you post any fics on your journal? and don't feel pressured bb, i'm sure it's exceptional.

OMG! i didn't get to see the premier on youtube last night! but they released the songs and i couldn't be any happier. I listened to it and spazzed around on the ground because I couldn't control myself. and only TOP could work that hair. he looks like a sexy tall elf. and GD is, oh my jhflagsa.

Re: WHOOOOO HEYYY MY FELLOW GD & T.O.P'S COMBACK SPAZZING BUDDY!!! <3 LOOOL suprshineepmbng December 16 2010, 00:12:09 UTC

Awwhh Thank You BB!. Loool what??? you took my Comment Virginity??!!..Why You Evil Big Bang Spazzing Partner!!! Jk Jk..Well atleast it was a 2pm/Jay/Big Bang Loving Aussie like you huh?!..and not some other Creeper!..or are you a Creeper?!! xDD. And you liked it?!..Damn You, taking my Comment Innocence Hehehe. We must be Nut Crazy to be talking about this, but atleast we're Nut Crazy together!!! Lmao.

JAY IS JUST...NO WORDS *MELTS IN GOO WITH BB*

Omooo your compliments have got me GRINNING LIKE A MAD MAN!!! (though I'm a girl..so that makes no sense..see I can't even speak properly noww coz I'm so happy!!! haha), I'm blushing dammit! xD. Thank you sooo much Hun, that really means ALOTTT to me!!! <3..AWWWH I LOVE YOU!!!, YOU'RE TOO SWEET TO ME ( ... )

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khunyoungexists December 14 2010, 03:12:57 UTC

amazingggggg

HEYYYAA suprshineepmbng December 14 2010, 11:49:40 UTC

Awwhh Thank You For reading & commenting!!!. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!. I see you write lots of fanfics too!, I'm guessing KhunYoung is your OTP (duh obviously from your name..hehee) & coz all the pairings are KhunYoung in the fics loool. YAYYY *Snaps Snaps* their my OTP too. I'll haave to check your fics out!!!. Oh and I'm working on my main Khunyoung chaptered fic at the moment, and I'll be putting the first chapter up very soon. Hope you'll enjoy it! <3.

dreamoscope December 14 2010, 03:22:57 UTC

you know, the concept is actually really nice, if you turn it into a fic im sure its going to be lovely :)
i love how you construct your sentences, its a pity that this isnt a full fic, cos it will be just nice :) post more ^^

HEYYYYYY WOOHOLIC!!! suprshineepmbng December 14 2010, 11:43:51 UTC

Firstly, Thank You for reading & commenting!!!. You're one of my first commenter's so YAY!!!, I read alot on Inorae, and I always come across your comments, and I have to say this, But I AM IN LOVEEE with your screen name & icon!!!, they're genius together!, and I been following your posts and I loved the Real 2pm One about Woobby!!!, cracked me up the way you were spazzing all over the post hahahaa. But I was wondering do you written any fanfics already coz I couldn't find any fanfic posts on your LJ page. Oh and if you're thinking of writing a fantasy fic, I say go for it!, 'no imagination' pfft your 'Dreamoscope' after all!!!, how much more imagination can you get?! Lol ( ... )

dreamoscope December 14 2010, 11:55:58 UTC

i cant find your reply to my entry so i cant reply there, so i had to just reply here. lol.

my writings are actually housed under a different community here if you want to read it :)
thank you for liking my icon and username ahhaha. you're too nice :)

you're actually posting a -holdup- khunyoung fic?? and a chaptered one at that?? I'm so exciteddddd :D post soon!

suprshineepmbng December 15 2010, 17:57:11 UTC

Lol it's okay!. Omooo I knew I read one of your fics/drabbles!!!, your name was SOOO familiar, I just couldn't put my finger on what it was called, but after going through all your fics, I realised it's 'Wink Machine'!!! (and read some of your Itunes drabbles too). I read 'wink machine' quite a while ago (coz I read fics on my phone all the time when I'm bored, so it feels longg, though it's probably only been a month since it was uploaded lol) but it was REALLY GOOOOD!!!, I commented after reading it for the 2nd time, coz I wanted to make sure it was the right one hehe. But I LOVEEE your work BB!!!. I feel so honoured to have you comment on this! *bows*. All. Hail. Dreamoscope. Hahaa. YAYYY I've found all your works now!!!, I'll be busy reading them and grinning like the madman you make me after reading anything you write! xDD. Thanks so much for the link! <3. Ohh yuh my fist actual fanfic, and it's KhunYoung obviously, them being my OTP!!! (ChanHo a close 2nd xP), and I know i'm gonna be buried in work as it'll be chaptered, but I ( ... )

dreamoscope December 15 2010, 22:51:40 UTC

oh wink machine. haha that was kind of a short piece. i am actually thinking of doing those kind of one-shot for every PM members, and make it into a series :D but currently its still in planning. hahahaha.
just a warning, 90% of my works are angst-based. cos i cant write anything else. so i totally accept if you dont read angst :)

and ill be waiting on that khunyoung fic :) you should stop worrying that it'll flop bb, you never know until you really write it :) and writing is a process, and it could only go up from here. aja aja! ♥

suprshineepmbng December 15 2010, 23:47:20 UTC

Ahh yeah it was a short piece but still none the less a GREAT piece from your GENIUS BRAIN!!!. Whoooooo I'm so FOR that idea!, GO FOR IT BB!!!, and I will adequately read it and take over your comment section by squealing over it! Hahahaa xDD. Yay it'd be great to read all the members thoughts like this!, but if you decide not to do it, you better give us something else to make up for it giirl!, or I'll have to chase you with a broom (the asian style) until you write something to quench our thirst loool Jk Jk..I could never do that to you bb! hehe. Yuh angst is fine for me!, I'm totally into both angst and happy fics, I've read stuff that've ripped my heart out, but it was worth it coz it ended up being amazing anyway heh. So don't worry I'll read to my heats content. And even if I wasn't an angst person, I'd read it for your sake and then curse at you for making it so sad lol. I get what you mean though, in the first chapter of my (still unnamed) khunyoung fic, I tried to make it sound kinda funny but it turned out totally ANGSTY ( ... )

Ash Unnie's Reply roxmysoxjae231 December 15 2010, 20:46:15 UTC

I Really like this Rubz.......it just reminds of I Want to cry now
sad songs remind me of the sorrow that one human being can go through ...
so good Rubz finally you are using your essay skills for something one thing though i think you should make a fan fic....:D

Re: Ash Unnie's Reply suprshineepmbng December 16 2010, 00:25:30 UTC

Awwwh Thank You Hyunnie!!!..Your the first of my friends who bothered to read this!, and hearing you say it's good, means ALOT, coz I know how hard you are to please, what with being Rebellious Seng all the time Looool. Yuh I really love the song, I always said I'd do something for the song, and now I did at last!!! YAY FOR MY LAZY ASS NOT BEING LAZY FOR ONCE!!! xDD. And yeah it is really sad, i agree, reminds me of humans being faced with injustice and all the hard times one single person can go through. They could probably fill a whole book with their stories that happen throughout their lifetime, but if they don't write it or tell anyone, it'll never be known and they'll soon be forgotten when they're gone, which is the really depressing part, but nonetheless the truth. Yuhhh Dongii finally using the 'Essay Skills'!!! for something apart from torturing you by commenting you masses *Hallelujah!*. Oh you mean a fanfic out of this??. I'm currently writing a KhunYoung chaptered fanfic though, the first chapter's like done, I have to ( ... )