Fic: She's Long Gone

Oct 04, 2013 04:15

Title: She's Long Gone
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Fandom: The Closer
Rating: PG-13. Warning: Character Death.
Word Count: 2,213
Prompt: Sharon is killed in the line of duty, and Brenda realizes that she had been in love with her for years from ubiquitousmixie for the fic war on Tumblr.
Disclaimer: Not my characters.
A/N: After finishing this story I realized that the ( Read more... )

pairing: brenda/sharon, title: she's long gone., fandom: the closer, rating: pg-13

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isolith October 4 2013, 07:29:56 UTC
Heartwrenching and beautifully written; I always love your stuff and the way you write =)

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surena_13 October 7 2013, 14:35:51 UTC
Thank you!

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surena_13 October 7 2013, 14:36:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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ubiquitousmixie October 4 2013, 13:29:46 UTC
OUCH. I knew when I left you the prompt that you would be able to do it justice--you've always been flawless at writing angst. But when I saw that you had posted it, two things happened. 1. Yay a fic for me!!! 2. Oh shit...why did I request this???

Knowing it would rip my heart out, I read it, and it was a beautiful, sad, heartbreaking story. I think you win this fic war, hun. Perfectly in character and totally believable...though now I'm going to go back to pretending these fictional characters will never die ;)

Well done...thank you for writing this.

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surena_13 October 7 2013, 14:38:06 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it because this was definitely not easy to write. But it was a great prompt and I'm glad you think I did a good job with it.

And yes, these fictional characters will never die. Period. No matter how many times I kill them off in fics, they will not die.

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obsessive_a101 October 5 2013, 00:06:38 UTC
Well... I knew going into this my heart would probably be torn to pieces, and I was right. (;_;)

This was beautifully written, well-characterized, and absolutely heart-breaking. I... Just - the description of the funeral... and yeah... I can't, and poor Brenda - lost in the aftermath. :(

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surena_13 October 7 2013, 14:38:46 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, well, the prompt didn't exactly allow for much happiness. It was angst all the way.

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