Your Little Whore

Jun 10, 2009 17:02


Title: Your Little Whore [Sequel to: My Thoughts Perverse]
Pairing: One-sided Peter/Edmund
Rating: R
Warnings: Rape. Incest.
Summary: Hold still, it will be over soon.

EDMUND'S POV 
Read more... )

peter/edmund, narnia slash

Leave a comment

Comments 19

the91whispers June 10 2009, 13:31:04 UTC
Cold, twisted, wicked, disturbing and haunting. You convey the emotions very well, I really feel for Edmund. Overall, perfect i love it.

Sometimes at night when I can't find sleep, I roll onto my side and open my eyes, and my breathing stops when I see you right there, wide awake and, motionless and watching.

^ esp Creepy.. o_O

Reply

surgical_rush June 11 2009, 03:36:38 UTC
Oh, you're too kind. Thank you so much!

xox

Reply


yazzigazzi June 10 2009, 16:28:15 UTC
That broke my heart. Poor Ed:(
And here I thought he, in some twisted way, liked what his brother was doing...
Anyway, good sequel. I cannot wait to see more of Narnia (P/E) of you!!

Reply

surgical_rush June 11 2009, 03:37:34 UTC
Thanks heaps!

xox

Reply


cocomouse123 June 10 2009, 17:25:17 UTC
wow, really creepy, but i liked it! A completely evil peter is such a cool concept

Reply

surgical_rush June 11 2009, 03:38:35 UTC
So glad you liked it.

Thanks a bunch for commenting :D

x

Reply


oximore June 11 2009, 01:43:04 UTC
Creepy, creepy, creepy in an painfully awesome way. Peter really is a sick puppy!

It was great to have Edmund POV.

Reply

surgical_rush June 11 2009, 03:39:57 UTC
He is so sick, right? But we all like it, terrible us.

lol. Thanks so much xox

Reply


xryanrainbowx June 11 2009, 03:56:23 UTC
I loved this in a sick way.
I really enjoy your writing and I hope you continue to write Peter/Edmund!
They are just so delicious and they will live forever in my heart.
<3 :)

Reply

surgical_rush June 11 2009, 04:00:56 UTC
They are totally delicious, I agree. I have written a few more short Peter/Edmund fics. You can find them in my journal or at narnia_slash.

Thank you very much for your comment, it is much appreciated.

xox

Reply


Leave a comment

Up