I Loved You First

[surgical_rush]

Title: I Loved You First
Pairing: Peter/Edmund
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Narnia and all characters affiliated with are the property of C.S. Lewis.
Summary: ‘Mom’ was your first word, but ‘Peter’ was your second.

Comments

[professorkatze]

*cuddleglomps Peter*
I love how omniscient and accepting and mature and amazing he is.

[surgical_rush]

Don't forget cute and fit and brooding and magnificent! lol.

Thank you for commenting!

xox

[surgical_rush]

Aww, thanks soo much! Makes me smile to hear that.

You're too awesome *hugs*

xx

[yazzigazzi]

This is really beautiful. I love that it rhymes at times (haha).

It feels like a poem to me... every word precious.

Thank you for sharing, once again, your work!

[surgical_rush]

It is always a pleasure to share my work with folk as lovely as yourself. And thank you, once again, for wonderful feedback.

I did notice that myself, it rhymes in a few places. Completely unintentional - believe it or not.

xox

[surgical_rush]

Thank you :D

xxx

[excentrykemuse]

Unbearably bittersweet. bravo!

cheers, cen

[surgical_rush]

Thank you so much.

Appreciate your comment, thanks for reading!

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