Slow Motion (William Moseley/Ben Barnes)

[surgical_rush]

Title: Slow Motion
Pairing: Will/Ben
Rating: R?
Warnings: None
Summary: There is no urgency in what they are doing, no rush.
Disclaimer: I am in no way affiliated with William Moseley or Ben Barnes, this is a work of absolute fiction.
A/N: Wow, so I haven't written anything since... uhmm, last century? Not sure what put me in the mood to write this. Its

Comments

[surgical_rush]

Thanks so much, thats good to hear. Thank you for reading.

PS: I love them too!

:D

x

[heidi_norsemyth]

It didn't seem unfinished, but that didn't stop me from wanting to see more of course. I sensed a sort of sadness coming from Will, almost like Ben was trying to offer some sort of comfort. And he put Will's feelings and needs above his own, that shows love, because if you're in a relationship just for the sex, you don't do that. Wonderful little fic, good job.

[surgical_rush]

Your interpretation of this is lovely, thanks for reading and sharing your opinion. Very glad you enjoyed this.

:D

[scorpia_strikes]

This is so plain and smooth and simple that one just can't help but love it. I would've loved more details and Will giving back as good as he gets but this is wonderfully lovely anyway, sometimes you just hit the top of the nail when you don't give away too much. Beautiful!

[surgical_rush]

I appreciate this comment so much. Thank you for taking the time to respond, and I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed the simplicity of my fic. Sometimes less is more, right?

:D

[scorpia_strikes]

Don't mention it! Yes, sometimes less is definitely more :)

[kasumi_kira]

Beautiful.
I think the ending really compliments the "slow motion" theme of the entire story. It creates this very mellow and sweet moment between two caring lovers. It also hints that the passion between Ben and Will is, both here and in their future, unending and forever.

[surgical_rush]

Thank you, its nice to hear your thoughts on this. I find that sometimes it is more enjoyable to read/write about the simple, relaxed intimacy between two people. And I am glad you found some beauty in this little fic. Thank you for taking the time to respond.

xx

[kasumi_kira]

You're very welcome, darling.

[celimood]

Thanks for your share! very impressive!

[surgical_rush]

Thank you very much ;D