To Please the Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][Chapter Eleven]

[surgical_rush]

Title: To Please the Monster Inside [Chapter Eleven]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

Comments

[comesaregular]

I wasn't counting on you updating already, but I wanted to check anyway (I usually don't really check my F-list) and I found chapter 11! I'm so glad! I enjoy the intensity of this story so much. Everything Jasper does is dark and wrong and he knows it, yet he wants Edward to know it too, just to spite him. I feel incredibly bad for Alice though, none of it is her fault, yet she probably suffers just as much as Jasper himself. By the way, I read a couple of comments ago that you and someone else talked about Jasper's bloodlust being hightened because of his empathy and I have to say, I'd never even thought about that! It makes so much sense.. The bloodlust of seven vampires combined must be enough to make one struggle, to say the least. Really interesting observation.:) Anyway, loved this chapter, as I do all of them.:)

Empathy and bloodlust

[post_script3]

Sorry I havent updated lately. I wrote a comment the last time but I don't think it got through and then I got caught up with school and everything. I gotta say this new side of Jasper is quite fascinating. I thought I sensed a bit of malice when he opened his mind to Edward and made him relive the moment when he (Jasper) fed from Carlisle. I gotta say you're the fastest updater on LiveJournal I've seen so far (and believe me I've lurked quite a lot in different fandoms). Speaking of Fandoms, do you write for any other beside Twilight (Merlin maybe?)
Anyways, looking foward to the next chapter as usual.
ttl.

Re: Empathy and bloodlust

[surgical_rush]

I have wrote a small amount of fics for Narnia slash. You can find them in my journal. But, speaking of Merlin, it isn't actually on TV here yet - I'm from Australia. It starts in about a week. And I do intend to watch it - so if I get inspired and write something I'll let you know.

I'm glad to hear you responded well to Jasper's darker side - I really wanted to explore that part of him. With him having been through so much war and conflict in his life, he has become a natural fighter, even a natural killer. He's truly a very interesting, deep character.

xox

Re: Empathy and bloodlust

[post_script3]

I've completely fallen in love with your Jasper.
As for Merlin, you should be able to find it on Youtube. I live in Canada and I have no idea when or if it will ever be shown here but I've watched pretty much all of the first season. And the slash (Merlin/Arthur especially)just writes itself, even the actors comment on it. Lets just hope it keeps coming, but I don't think that would be a problem, they're British not American (look up Smallville hoyay! and you'll see what I mean) and after Torchwood I think anything is possible.

Another one of my favourite is Skins (also watched it online) but only Series 3. You should be able to find the whole series 3 online.

I hope the weather's better in Australian than here (Canada, Ontario) where it's drap and dull and dreary [and yes alliteration is intentional;]
later.

[comesaregular]

Oh, by the way, non-story-related, what film is your icon from? It looks.. intriguing.:)

[surgical_rush]

Do you mean the icon I am currently displaying? It is from a film called "Dread". I haven't seen it as of yet, but hope to get hold of it soon. Its based on a story by Clive Barker, so I expect it should be worth watching.