To Please the Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][ChapterTwenty-One]

[surgical_rush]

Title: To Please the Monster Inside [ChapterTwenty-One]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

Comments

wow

[forgetluv]

my god this is really intense!

"I will give him what he wants, he can have me"

Re: wow

[surgical_rush]

Thank you, I am glad you like it.

x

[harrietmary]

Thats right Carlisle you feel guilty.

This chapter was really good, I can almost feel the tension. And for once , I think Edward is doing the right thing. I don't know what the out come will be but at the moment Jasper has the potentialy to seriously hurt Carlisle.

I hope Jasper 'get's well soon' in whatever way possible.

:)

[surgical_rush]

I will let you in on a little something that is going on in my head - I actually keep finding myself not wanting Jasper to get better, I don't want a happy ending. But then I think of Carlisle and I can't bear the thought of him being hurt even more, so then I decide that it has end well, for Carlisle's sake.

All these emotions over fictional characters, lol. The imagination is such a crazy thing.

Thanks xox

Your Awesome Story

[desmonda_265]

OMG! This story is amazing. I love you you keep building on the plot. I rarely read a story, book, article, etc., that I can't at least make a good guess as to what will happen next. I can't come close to hypothesizing to what will happen next. Will Jasper feed on a human? Will Carlisle satisfy his hunger in a different way? Will something completely different occur? I don't know and I am totally loving the anticipation. You do wonderful cliff hangers. I check this livejournal everyday to see if there is an update. I love that you steadily add more and more to your story. Keep up the good work. : )

Re: Your Awesome Story

[surgical_rush]

I'm happy to keep you guessing. Twists and turns are my favourite.

And I actually find cliffhangers easy to write. Maybe I am inspired by the suspense. lol.

Thanks heaps.

xoxox

[you_ravish_me]

Ok, so, Edward is gonig to get a slap.

Sorry I haven't been commenting as of late. Strep throat is kicking my ass and I feel like bleh. This story is only getting better and better. People, *cough* EDWARD *cough* should listen to Carlisle. Oy. I can't wait for more. Keep it up.

And with that. I'm gonig back to bed. I saw your strep ... It was BLEH!!!! :P

Peace and Love,

you_ravish_me

[surgical_rush]

Oh no, I hope you get better ASAP!

I send you a massive hug full of vitamins in order to ensure a swift recovery for you.

Thank you for finding the strength to read my story and leave a lovely comment.

:)

xoxox

Alive and Kickin!

[post_script3]

Hey there,
sorry I worried you. Didn't mean to disappear like that. But I've had quite a busy week and I've so tired lately. So I haven't had time to read over the last few chapters you posted or to comment properly. But things are starting to look up. So you'll definetly hear from me this week.

So how have you been lately?

Re: Alive and Kickin!

[surgical_rush]

Oh my goodness, it is so fantastic to hear from you! I had no idea what you might be up to or what was happening, and I didn't want to keep leaving you messages like some kind of stalker. But its wonderful to hear that you are ALIVE! lol.

I've been pretty good, thank you for asking. Just working and vegetating, you know, the usual.

But how are you? I have just missed you so much. You can't imagine the little smile that popped onto my face when I saw I had a new message and it was from you.

What has been keeping you so busy, if you dont mind me asking?

Well, anyway so YAY, you have to catch up on my story - its just starting to get to the good part! (even if I do say so myself, lol.)

Cant wait to hear what you think.

xoxoxox

:D