22 | {merlin} for those hips and these ruby-red lips

[katakokk]

It seems all the writing I do is for exchanges. This time, erasureathon!

Title: for those hips and these ruby-red lips
Rating: PG for brief femslash allusions
Fandom: Merlin
Pairings/Characters: Morgause, Morgana
Word Count: 223
Summary: She fights with her, she fights for her. An erasure for erasureathon.

Disclaimer: I do not own Merlin (BBC), nor do I own ienablu's fics:

Comments

[sophinisba]

This is lovely! I especially love the messy glowing magic everywhere she can reach,, it feels so desperate and true.

[katakokk]

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[ienablu]

I keep trying to find a way to respond to this, but I keep ending up pointing at the screen and making dolphin noises.

This is stunning. Utterly and completely stunning, and beautiful, and painful, and evocative, and I have no idea how the hell you got that out of my writing, but I am preening over the fact that I somehow had something to do with this.

she loves Her painfully, stop
I keep coming back to this line, because just... I am seriously just making hand gestures, because I am do not have words for how perfect this is.

And I would end up parroting the entire thing back to you if I were to flail over every line that I loved (though I am going to another special mention to she can see // fractures grow in her // magic because the way you spaced it out is perfect and leaves it up to interpretation and I've read it five times already and I read it differently each time and how are you so wonderful?) and just... ldksahfasdhflasdhflasdhflkasdhf sadhfldsakhfasdhflashdfhasd flasdhfasdfasd this is wonderful.

[katakokk]

*blushes* Thank you so much! Your writing was so fascinating and beautiful and I kept seeing this theme of unresolved conflict, so I just sort of went with it and...this happened!

sldjfldf That is actually one of my favorite lines! I wasn't sure if anyone else actually was going to get anything out of it, but I am a huge fan of spiritual undertones in poetry and also I felt extremely clever because to me the lines with the "stop" at the end were like telegrams. I don't know, all of this was kind of just in my head.

Okay yay, you got that too! Well, got it in the sense that it really can be any way you want it to be depending on how you read it (I love that about poetry), so YAAAY. 8)

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I AM SO INCREDIBLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT! <333

[lindaross]