Hmmm... it isn't exactly "vague," persay... I mean, the feeling your are describing is actually rather clear... it is just the actual context that is lost.
I feel like, with most people, this would actually be about a person... but with you... I can see it being internal dialog...
Good conclusion though. Ending with picture of your supposed mental state makes me imagine amazing things...
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I feel like, with most people, this would actually be about a person... but with you... I can see it being internal dialog...
Good conclusion though. Ending with picture of your supposed mental state makes me imagine amazing things...
Too many ellipses... far too many...
Good post, 4/5.
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