Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGholdouttroutNovember 5 2007, 17:22:07 UTC
Sara stared blankly at the scenery in front of them. The ocean below made a muted roar that drowned out the lack of noise from the land behind them
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Re: Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGpepper_fieldNovember 5 2007, 17:36:26 UTC
w00t! Now you're writing it, too! *glees*
Aw, this is very them - I like the way Sara punctures his self-martyrdom, and speaks to him in the way Jack understands - kind of short, honest, direct. And the way they kind of relax into each other, at the end of the world. And this -
The ocean below made a muted roar that drowned out the lack of noise from the land behind them.
Re: Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGabyssinia4077November 5 2007, 18:07:00 UTC
oh oh oh oh!!!!!
I love your Sara! Oh, Sara with the understanding and the not letting him beat himself up and the pain and the taking what they have and the regrets and not and...
You wrote Jack/Sara apocafic! Eeee! And it is so good!
Re: Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGbeanpotNovember 5 2007, 19:50:36 UTC
Ya know, I've always enjoyed Jack/Sara - I just seem to enjoy them that much more in apocafic. I wonder why. I suppose I will just need to read it more to help figure this out. :)
Re: Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGthothmesNovember 5 2007, 20:16:27 UTC
My theory is that Jack/Sara works best in Apocafic because it would take something that big to get them to confront the pain, the guilt, and the feelings of futility and approach each other with a willingness to share again. Silence is an ingrained habit with those two.
Re: Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGholdouttroutNovember 5 2007, 21:27:22 UTC
I think it's that thread of connection--it's not every day you get to sweep your ex-wife off on a motorcycle without her yelling at you, but it's kinda nice that he didn't forget about her...
Re: Jack/Sara- cliff, angsty apocafic, PGadvectionNovember 6 2007, 20:39:57 UTC
What an excellent use of the prompt word! Love the image of them there at the wild ocean's edge. The roar of the ocean in front/below and the silence of death behind gives me chills, and the interaction is wonderful -- so, so Them, and such a great Sara.
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Aw, this is very them - I like the way Sara punctures his self-martyrdom, and speaks to him in the way Jack understands - kind of short, honest, direct. And the way they kind of relax into each other, at the end of the world. And this -
The ocean below made a muted roar that drowned out the lack of noise from the land behind them.
Ahhh, apocafic - can't beat it. :)
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Thank you! Jack/Sara is very different from any other pairing on the show, isn't it? Hmmm...
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I love your Sara! Oh, Sara with the understanding and the not letting him beat himself up and the pain and the taking what they have and the regrets and not and...
You wrote Jack/Sara apocafic! Eeee!
And it is so good!
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(you're still being blamed, here)
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Yes. More Jack/Sara apocafic. Necessary. OMG.
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Hee!
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Thank you!
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