Re: Jack/Daniel - lust (NC-17)sidljNovember 9 2007, 06:38:12 UTC
*thud*
Daniel went still when Jack gripped him in orgasm, his mouth going soft and tender, then made a low sound way back in his throat and bathed Jack's hand in sweet, slippery semen. There is just so much to love about that sentence. *sigh*
Re: Jack/Daniel - lust (NC-17)_minxy_November 16 2007, 03:23:44 UTC
Oh, hello! This might... this might be one of the most original premises I've seen for Jack and Daniel. Two adults at an incredibly awkward sleepover, or first night shipped out, or something.
And then they go have sex in the guest bedroom like teenagers.
I love how they quietly made an assignation, met up, and then promptly started bickering as they shoved each other towards the bed. Such a 'finally!' feeling mixed right in with 'oh, dear God.' :)
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Daniel went still when Jack gripped him in orgasm, his mouth going soft and tender, then made a low sound way back in his throat and bathed Jack's hand in sweet, slippery semen. There is just so much to love about that sentence. *sigh*
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Hee!! That part made me laugh. I love the impromptu feel of this.
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And then they go have sex in the guest bedroom like teenagers.
I love how they quietly made an assignation, met up, and then promptly started bickering as they shoved each other towards the bed. Such a 'finally!' feeling mixed right in with 'oh, dear God.' :)
Really nice.
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LOL. Oh, no doubt Daniel was pleased with that reaction. ;)
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Slam
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