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All We Need of Hell (Sam/Jack) ADULT (2/2)

Feb 01, 2007 21:01

All We Need of Hell, Part 2

( It's just that easy... )

Comments 24

momm2five May 12 2007, 19:20:52 UTC

wow. I'm very glad this was rec'd. wow. awesome! Your Jack is so very real . . . and the way he draws Sam in is too. This is just awesome . . .

surreallis_fic May 15 2007, 00:34:25 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! Very kind words that made my day. :)

My love for Sam/Jack is so angsty. ;)

kejsarinna May 13 2007, 20:37:16 UTC

here from stargateficrec. very faboulus story! loved it, cried a lot, was impressed.
thanks!

surreallis_fic May 15 2007, 00:35:19 UTC

Oh, you're welcome. And thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was a bear to write, and it makes it all worth it to know it was read and appreciated. :)

croaky May 15 2007, 10:11:43 UTC

Impressive writing and a soulful portrait of the less pretty (yet endlessly intriguing) parts of humanity VS. love and war. Got to love that. Thank you for the treat! ♥

surreallis_fic July 4 2007, 22:18:23 UTC

You're welcome! And thank you! I struggled a bit trying to write this, so I really appreciate the feedback. :)

pippe May 26 2007, 02:58:13 UTC

In the darkness he sees the flutter of black feathers in her hair

I have no idea where you came up with the black crow idea, but it works beautifully.

surreallis_fic July 4 2007, 22:17:09 UTC

Thank you! The crow thing actually came from a thought I had one day while watching an ep with Ba'al in it. Cliff Simon has these utterly amazing eyes, dark and glittery like flint, and he can make them appear so cold and dead, it reminded me of crow's eyes. And I thought that if you studied those eyes long enough, they'd haunt you.

And then it was easy enough to mix Domitian and Ba'al in Jack's mind, to make Ba'al's eyes the epitome of evil...

:)

qthelights May 30 2007, 14:47:17 UTC

This is absolutely beautiful - angsty and sad and hurting and heartfelt and gorgeous.

I love that they both have to change, to suffer in order to be together. I love that Jack is so terribly selfish, because love IS selfish. And it isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Thank you for this!

surreallis_fic July 4 2007, 22:14:54 UTC

Thank you! You're so right. Love is selfish, and I think it is in Jack to be this way, especially if something happens to take his restraints away. And I kept picturing the way he'd have to change Sam, gradually, in order to take her with him. But she's so susceptible to him...

I'm glad you enjoyed it!