oh sweetie. this just about killed me. it's beautifully written and kind of elegant in the way you describe the scene, the emotions, liv's thoughts, even the near miss car accident and elliot's enjoyment of it--all angstily graceful, but when she realizes that he always burns his hand to keep her from burning hers, well, i think that's about as perfect a metaphor for their relationship as could ever be written.
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