I love this story and I love Captive. However, I feel like this fic was cut short. I was looking forward to a longer, more detailed fic. The detail of the earlier chapters led me to believe this.
This is by no means a flame, just honest feedback. Please don't be offended. I will be first in line to read your next fic (hopefully there will be more!)
Hi :) I'm glad you liked the fic and thanks for the great feedback. I ended it there because I wanted to give them a happy ending. Also, the greater detail in earlier chapters was all about them coming to terms with (and struggling against) their willfulness. I hope that as I improve as a writer, I'll be able to communicate that more in the story. Thanks again for reading and for your fair and constructive criticism. :)
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I wouldn't mind being on an island with Guy :p
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I love this story and I love Captive. However, I feel like this fic was cut short. I was looking forward to a longer, more detailed fic. The detail of the earlier chapters led me to believe this.
This is by no means a flame, just honest feedback. Please don't be offended. I will be first in line to read your next fic (hopefully there will be more!)
Overall it is a lovely fic. Thank you for writing
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I'm glad you liked the fic and thanks for the great feedback. I ended it there because I wanted to give them a happy ending. Also, the greater detail in earlier chapters was all about them coming to terms with (and struggling against) their willfulness. I hope that as I improve as a writer, I'll be able to communicate that more in the story.
Thanks again for reading and for your fair and constructive criticism. :)
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