Never Runs Smooth - Part 8 (Epilogue)

Jul 27, 2006 11:42

Title: Never Runs Smooth
Rating: R (for the xes *g*)

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ceslas July 28 2006, 02:29:01 UTC
Ahhh, as always a supremely wonderful chapter on Mal and Inara. They display love so completely that it takes my breath away. Thank you....

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quillscribe July 28 2006, 23:53:56 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! :-D

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terimaru July 29 2006, 04:33:16 UTC
“Wo huì yong yuan ài ni,” he rasped,

:THUD:

His face held an expression she’d only seen a couple of times - wistful and sad, with a whole lot of things unsaid flashing by so fast, if she hadn’t been looking, she would have missed them. Grief, fear, worry, protectiveness… She marveled at how complicated he was. She’d spent her life learning of men, yet with Mal everything remained a mystery. Each new thing she learned about him gave him yet another facet. He was the most glorious, stubborn, noble, beautiful man she’d ever met.

I claim this whole paragraph as my favoritest thing of all. I love how you made me see all these emotions flash across his face.

This, like all of your stories, was wonderful; and teh xes made my toes all tingly - in a good kinda way. ;-P

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deadpoetwoffie July 30 2006, 05:00:27 UTC
wow. hmmmmm. yay!!!! this was so awesome!!!!!!!!!!

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