Paige, I think you did a great job with this. I liked the titles and your writing was really well done. Grad school has its advantages apparently.
Ethan found out about them when Simon sent Kaylee to fetch him after Zoë fainted. This made me laugh and scare the dog. :P
Now I have other issues - ie. now you have to show me the proposal, the wedding, the day to day life before the kids, learning to get along with Sadie. Mal with Zoe's children. Those kinds of issues.
The dinosaurs - wow. That was poignant and Wash would have loved it.
Yay! Nate and Zack. Two new characters in Sushi!Fic. Are they identical except for their personalities? We have twins at our church that look exactly alike but their personalities are completely different.
Nate and Zack are not identical, they look similar as in two brothers in the same family, but I decided on fraternal twins. And their personalities are equally different.
Nathaniel is much more like Zoe's serious side. He's a quiet, contemplative boy who takes charge when needed. He's extremely independent, though socially, he kind of follows his brother around a little.
Zackary is, for lack of a better word, a clown. He's louder than Nate, he laughs easily, and he's more outgoing. He represents the side of Zoe we gt glimpses of in teh television show when she was with Wash.
Put the two of them together, and you get trouble, as in mischievous schemes and a lot of looking after. They absolutely torture Sadie. And yet they'd be the first to throw themselves under a train for her. So yeah, there's some character stuff.
Looks like I'll have my writing cut out for me! Hehehe!
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Ethan found out about them when Simon sent Kaylee to fetch him after Zoë fainted. This made me laugh and scare the dog. :P
Now I have other issues - ie. now you have to show me the proposal, the wedding, the day to day life before the kids, learning to get along with Sadie. Mal with Zoe's children. Those kinds of issues.
The dinosaurs - wow. That was poignant and Wash would have loved it.
Yay! Nate and Zack. Two new characters in Sushi!Fic. Are they identical except for their personalities? We have twins at our church that look exactly alike but their personalities are completely different.
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Nate and Zack are not identical, they look similar as in two brothers in the same family, but I decided on fraternal twins. And their personalities are equally different.
Nathaniel is much more like Zoe's serious side. He's a quiet, contemplative boy who takes charge when needed. He's extremely independent, though socially, he kind of follows his brother around a little.
Zackary is, for lack of a better word, a clown. He's louder than Nate, he laughs easily, and he's more outgoing. He represents the side of Zoe we gt glimpses of in teh television show when she was with Wash.
Put the two of them together, and you get trouble, as in mischievous schemes and a lot of looking after. They absolutely torture Sadie. And yet they'd be the first to throw themselves under a train for her. So yeah, there's some character stuff.
Looks like I'll have my writing cut out for me! Hehehe!
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Heee heee! Best line *G*
Nice, I like the little snapshots over time, gives a bigger picture.
sweet :o)
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