It's What I Need/M/Joick

[susnemuznae]

Title: It's What I Need
Rating: Mature
Summary: It's not meant to be like this, not what I planned at all. I don't want to feel like this.
Pairing: Joey&Nicky :}
Warnings: Underage sex, and incest

A/N: This was, inspired by music. So.. thank you music?! Hahaha, but I hope you guys like this, I feel proud of this one. Haha, btw, I love each and

Comments

[mayzieneverland]

I love it when people write smut and actually think about it; there's no way these boys wouldn't have at least a little bit of guilt about their actions.

This was amazingly done, so bittersweet and beautiful.

Truly well done, sugar.

[susnemuznae]

Aww, hun, thankyou ^_^
♥

[sweetfarthings]

What was to come?
HOW CAN YOU GO ENDING SUCH A WONDERFUL PIECE WITH UNAWARE OF WHAT WAS TO COME?!?!
that implies bad!
I DON'T LIKE BAD.
ok so thats a lie, bad is great!
buuuuut. Now i'm curious. and I need to know whats going to happen.
fj ksla fjpska

[susnemuznae]

bahaha, that made my day, "I DON'T LIKE BAD."

hahaha.chances are, ill write a part two but may the thing to come will be good or maybe it will be bad

that last line, i totally wrote it on a whim. hahha, but thank you sooo much for taking the time to review <3

[faerie_dance]

“Joe… right there, I’m close… ungh, fuckyesohmygod,” Nick was a mess, his hands clenched tight around the sheet, sweat shining on his forehead and chest, mouth gaping open, and legs wrapped tight around Joe’s waist.

My mind totally had a mental orgasm from those lines. Holy shit, girl! This was ridiculously hot but still had the powerful deep aspect to it! Fucking amazing! I love it! I love how you painted them! I just...guh! GUH!

I can't wait to see what happens either! Sequel!Wiffle attacks again! I want part 2!!! bwahahahaha!!! MORE!

[susnemuznae]

Awww, thank you, love :} I'm not sure when part two will be up, I still need to figure out what's going to happen! Hahaha, but thank you so much. And btw, your icon > everything

^_^

[neekbreek]

ugh i seriously love everything you write
this was beautifully done<3

[susnemuznae]

D'aww thank you! I really appreciate your comment <3

[deep_fanson]

That was hot...hehe.

[susnemuznae]

Haha, thanks :D