Pseudo Cloud Nine/M/Joick

Aug 31, 2008 21:25

Title: Pseudo Cloud Nine
Rating: Mature!
Summary: " 'I need you.' The younger one whispers. "
Pairing: Joick
Warnings: Incest, underage sex

A/N: OH MY GOD SHE WROTE SOMETHING! Sorry my darlings, but this was so no expected, I just happened to have some time, so I whipped this up. So it's not that good, at all. Oh, and to make it worse (ohimgaw, ( Read more... )

joick, jonasbrothers

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sabastionangel September 1 2008, 04:51:42 UTC
aww
i love when porn actually has some depth
haha
this is good
even without being proofread
you do some of my FAVORITE jonascest pieces
i have a few of your fics in my memories cos they're just GRAND!!

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susnemuznae September 1 2008, 05:05:05 UTC
Oh my, thank you so much :)
<3

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sabastionangel September 1 2008, 05:05:52 UTC
no problem!
i just hope that my soon-to-be-posted first fic
is as good as yours

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susnemuznae September 1 2008, 05:07:25 UTC
Ohh, I'm sure it'll be lovely for a first fic :}

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hotfruits September 1 2008, 06:44:58 UTC
Amazing!

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susnemuznae September 1 2008, 06:45:49 UTC
Thank you!
:}

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gina942 September 1 2008, 10:48:26 UTC
love it :DD
can you do me like a tinyyy favour, and tell me what you think of mine? XP, its my first one & i really wanna know what people think :)

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susnemuznae September 1 2008, 15:06:57 UTC
Thank you :) and sure, do you have a link to it?

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gina942 September 1 2008, 15:13:06 UTC
your welcome :) & yay!
yeah i do :)
http://gina942.livejournal.com/1120.html#cutid1

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cstardust September 1 2008, 19:21:07 UTC
OMG, this was awesome! Everything was just perfect. This was one of the most realistic Joick sex scenes I've ever read. This was my favorite part: “Mmh, yes, Nick … come for me.”

“I love you.”

“I love you too, baby.” Idk, it's just so sweet. Write more of them! Haha. ♥

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susnemuznae September 1 2008, 19:45:57 UTC
Awww, thank you so much!
:}

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rosettirose March 2 2009, 07:27:48 UTC
your writing still kills me. i loveee it.
one of the most realistic pieces ive read in a while. :)
i need to stop reading all of these. my mems are already full enough as it is. :P

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susnemuznae March 2 2009, 14:39:26 UTC
Awww, thank you, dear <3

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