[oneshot] The Long-coated Stranger

[yoyocchi]

Title: The Long-coated Stranger
Author: yoyocchi
Rating: PG-13
Genre: fantasy, slight gore
Summary: He helped humans granting their wishes. The service was not for free, by the way.

Comments

[ichigocherry]

♥♥♥♥♥♥ some mistakes in spelling/choice of words and one or two sentences needed to rephrase but overall a good read. c: I'd like to know more about why the girl did what she did etc etc and more /interaction/ between both of them (sorta like ciel/sebastian where both are "companions" yet are very cautious?) so that the death seems more scary in a way? /incoherent/

I was preparing my self for the picture but turns out it was a silhouette xD phew lolololol

[yoyocchi]

tell me where the mistakes are and I'll love you a hundred folds ♥♥♥ Since I didn't think much when I wrote it, I almost have no idea about those details myself wheeeeeee /runs

Fixed the color tone so prepare yourself once again >D

[ichigocherry]

I'm busy so remind me next time k <3333 thats pretty much me when im writing anything tbh

the pic wont loadddddddd

[yoyocchi]

Oh well I'll just link you the pic. Here you go! http://24.media.tumblr.com/a3ba802bc1ca4a4b8371a5c1246a645b/tumblr_mqdb5dvz671ri7wu8o1_r2_1280.png