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The Art of Deception (Yunho x Jaejoong) - Chapter Eleven

Oct 16, 2011 20:16

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kazemomo October 17 2011, 06:30:38 UTC

spot for tomorrow.

kazemomo October 18 2011, 04:31:33 UTC

lol. that was so cute and cheesy on yunho's part how you ended this chapter. thank you for giving us something happy to read about. and now the next chapter is going to fall into their sorrow.

seriously. who wouldn't misunderstand if someone just confessed to you and you don't even say a thing. maybe yunho was right and jae did run on the rooftops to that place knowing that yunho was going to appologize if he did catch up.

i bet yoochun was acting sheepish, he knows as much as minsu about how yunjae feel about each other.

sutefaniidesu October 19 2011, 03:18:16 UTC

Why are you saying that? :o *gasp* Do I usually do this kind of thing? Plunging my readers into tragedy after something good happens? (I guess I do, huh.) XD

Jae might have overreacted a little, but yeah, the misunderstanding is, well, understandable. ;)

Yoochun is a little clueless right now :3

Thanks for reading!

kazemomo October 19 2011, 04:20:48 UTC

*giggle, laugh* how could yoochun be clueless at this time? i thought he knew jae best? 0.o

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sweetballads October 17 2011, 08:54:31 UTC

I totally didn't see you had updated TWICE OX so yeah, had a lot of stuff to catch up to haha <3

This chapter was sooooo incredibly cute <333 I'm all giggly and fangirly now hahaha! I could read this forever and ever, oh the sweet romance <3

sutefaniidesu October 19 2011, 03:19:54 UTC

That's fine! :) As long as you read it!

Ah, was it? I don't know, I wasn't satisfied with it, don't know why... @@ I'll make future chapters better! I have more than one plot twist up my sleeve... ;)

Seems like I've reduced everyone to giggly fangirls... Good! ♥

Thank you so much! ^O^

trieze0713 October 17 2011, 09:01:58 UTC

Kyaaaaaa! Love confessions! Thanks bb... it just made my day after a constant problematic works at the office :D

sutefaniidesu October 19 2011, 03:20:27 UTC

That's good! I'm glad I was able to make your day better! Hope things settle down at work :o Thanks for reading!

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sutefaniidesu October 19 2011, 03:22:41 UTC

I promised myself to write such a scene, ha ha... I can so imagine Jaejoongie as such a character, walking on roofs and climbing everywhere ha ha ^^ Well Jaejoongie can see the beauty in the city, even though he lives in such a poor district...

Seriously, Yunho is kinda pathetic here OTL What an ending to my fic this would be!

Thanks bb! ^^

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taemun October 17 2011, 11:19:16 UTC

Uwaaa I didn't think they'd actually confess alredy! Too cute♥ Still waiting for Jae to tell Yunho about his past though.... And the play scene...

And I also have a slight feeling that something might happen with Yunho and his father... Dependeing on how long this story will be though :P

sutefaniidesu October 19 2011, 03:24:51 UTC

The confessions shall come... I have a lot planned, it might take up a whole chapter to say it all! :o And the play as well, I have to work on that :3

This story will have at least ~25 chapters, probably more. :3 Like my other stories. And Yunho's parents are not completely out of the picture, no ;)

Thanks for reading!