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The Art of Deception (Yunho x Jaejoong) - Chapter Twelve

Oct 27, 2011 23:57

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youinmyjumpsuit October 28 2011, 07:56:17 UTC

What a sly boy! But... He just gave yunho a run for his life. Hmmm can Yunho come home and sneak JJ and the guys in? :)

sutefaniidesu October 31 2011, 01:20:03 UTC

That's Jaejoong's way of living, sadly... Everything that happened to him made him this way, but he'll soon realize he can't continue like that all his life... and I'm not sure that would work, ha ha. Someone would be bound to notice if like 15 people suddenly popped in their house! XD

Thanks for reading!

sweetballads October 28 2011, 23:15:03 UTC

Ahhhh, I already had this vague feeling Jaejoong wouldn't pay since he didn't mention it at first XD

But ahh, I see you're leading the plot to the side of the parents. To be quite honest, I'm a little bit surprised by their lack of actions to find their son back. They didn't hear a thingfrom him ever since he left: aren't they afraid that something bad happened to Yunho?

Other than that, I'm still enjoying this story :D can't wait for the next part!

sutefaniidesu October 31 2011, 01:23:04 UTC

I was careful not to let anything seem like he would, while avoiding to make him admit he wouldn't, so it wasn't like he lied about it XD I did add the parents, but there's a lot more to come before they step in the picture again. It's not that they're not worried about him, but they would never look in Jaejoong's neighborhood to find Yunho, so the boys are kinda out of the public eye, "isolated" in a way. :3

Good thing you are! Thank you!

bakamitsukichan October 29 2011, 06:34:46 UTC

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sutefaniidesu October 31 2011, 01:23:57 UTC

"If you can't convince them, confuse them!"

I totally could have included this in the chapter! It does seem like one of Jaejoong's principles. XDDD You really made me laugh, haha!

THanks for reading!

nur_denz November 15 2011, 20:57:22 UTC

"I said we would eat and leave. I never said we would pay."

lmao my bad bad joongie, u are sooooo cute... >_< poor my yunnie to have experience like this but it's awesome aren't they, yunnie-shi.. >_<

sutefaniidesu November 15 2011, 21:06:11 UTC

It's true, he didn't lie! Just omitted a few details... ;) But it's not his fault if he's bad, he has always lived this way... :/ You'll learn about his past soon. Thanks for reading!

kim_jaejoong November 16 2011, 00:17:54 UTC

naughty jae is naughty. you can't just eat and run lol

sutefaniidesu November 16 2011, 05:01:42 UTC

Apparently in his book you can! XD Thanks for reading!