awww poor Yuto, he has no one to confide his secret to unlike Inoo-chan.
as always i through virtual confetti!!! cause your stories are always so nice to read through, their so eloquent in my minds eye.
hehe i think theirs only one mistake that i was able to catch and it was this one, ~"Yuto has a point,” Yamada told them, “sometimes how you look and who you talk to will get you dinner that night, not that using them for this purpose is nice but they give you good advice if you need it. I mean that have been through everything.”~ its the last sentence it should be they not that.
but yeah overall i really like this first chapter, you gave two good perspectives of Inoo and Yuto. hmmm good luck on your exams and i cant wait for your net update near christmas. -3-
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as always i through virtual confetti!!! cause your stories are always so nice to read through, their so eloquent in my minds eye.
hehe i think theirs only one mistake that i was able to catch and it was this one, ~"Yuto has a point,” Yamada told them, “sometimes how you look and who you talk to will get you dinner that night, not that using them for this purpose is nice but they give you good advice if you need it. I mean that have been through everything.”~ its the last sentence it should be they not that.
but yeah overall i really like this first chapter, you gave two good perspectives of Inoo and Yuto. hmmm good luck on your exams and i cant wait for your net update near christmas. -3-
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I'm glad you think they are eloquent. oh my i'll fix that mistake right now. thanks for pointing it out.
thank-you i'll update soon i promise.
thanks for reading
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I love how much reaction you get from my unintentional and intentional humour, it makes me smile everytime.
I just had to add in the unofficial Chiitaro in there, you know me.
senpai will be revealed don't worry. it will be an interesting one i assure you that.
thanks for reading, seriously, i hope you had a good xmas.
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