Fool No More ~One-Shot~

[suteii]

Title: Fool No More
Chapters: One-Shot
Genre: Betrayal
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nakajima Yuto x Okamoto Keito; Okamoto Keito x Yaotome Hikaru
Disclaimer: DO NOT OWN! Either the people or the song performed by the group S Club 8.
Summary: Yuto being a little bit jealous of his boyfriend whenever he is around other people starts to believe that maybe his

Comments

[columbin3]

this is one-shot??
ahh.. I believe this should have a part 2 or something.
but well, I'm not the writer.
demo.. it's really cruel for Keito to do such thing!
huhu! he's so bad to do that to Yuto!!

[suteii]

You want a sequel? Really? ^_^ Interesting. I'll think about it.

It's not all Keito's fault though, Hikaru is to blame as well, he knew that Keito and Yuto were together, but things happen when people spend too much time with one another. Think of it more as a falling out.

[columbin3]

YEAH!
I kinda want a part2 where Keito gets punched by Yuto because of CHEATING!!!!
hahaha! well, its up to you.

anyway, the story left me hanging because Keito-dear didn't break up with Yuto properly ne! Hmm, this is all my opinion though..
Hika should be burn for stealing keito! haha!! JOKE! XD

[vitong]

aw..
I think it should have part 2 with pairing yamajima?
Ahahaha..
Nice fic..^^

[suteii]

A sequel Really? Interesting, I'll have to think about it. A sequel would be hard.

But thanks for reading.

[maplarojcan]

hard core yamajima and all that i cant help but love the hints. :)

hahahahaha. i had a few problems here and there like the part where yuuto answered yamada sorry and you indicated sarcastically but yamada still says... it's ayt.

XD hahaha also, the tone of the fic is much much younger than when... we were both younger. i just noticed. hahaha. :)

I love this <3

[au_gravityfree]

poor Yuto, but I don't blame Keito & Hikaru for having feelings to each other.
it's hard to dump someone ~.~