Comments | suzanne78: And So It Began.... Part Eleven (Kyle/Oliver, R)

suzanne78

And So It Began.... Part Eleven (Kyle/Oliver, R)

Nov 08, 2009 18:00

Fandom: One Life to Live
Rating: R
Summary: Oliver Fish met Kyle Lewis in college. It changed his life forever.
A/N: To say I'm nervous about this chapter is an understatement. I don't write smut; I love reading it, but it makes me very uncomfortable to write about body parts graphically unless it's in dialogue. Also, I'm not gay nor am I a man ( Read more... )

kyle/fish, one life to live, fanfiction, *slash

Comments 5

abaylor22 November 9 2009, 01:27:56 UTC

get out!!! you are quick. YAYYYYYY!!! I'd grab a glass of chardonnay to accompany the read, but i've had to much today.LOl!!! i only read about your fears so far. I'm not a man, nor gay, nor for )myself)creative in writing, but i'm excited to read chp 11. You are definitely a talented writer.

gimlicakeshop November 9 2009, 02:47:32 UTC

I'm not a gay man either but I thought this was chapter was swell. I'm trying to stay spoiler free for next week so it helps to have something Kish related to read. I have no will power though so we'll see how long this lasts.

kat_us November 10 2009, 06:40:35 UTC

Nice job! I hope Oliver can let go of his fears for a while to
really *hints* explore this physical part of their relationship before the inevitable.
*sighs*

alanna_zero November 17 2009, 22:11:12 UTC

I really like your writing style. Great job!

luvflix December 27 2009, 12:27:26 UTC

I've written only one story for the Nuke comm - so not sure I qualify in saying I understand - but I felt the same way about writing gay porn in my fic. That was by far the hardest part of the almost 10,000 words, to tell it meaningfully, authentically and with some amount of class was my aim - personally I feel you did this in spades! Being a female as well I've only been able to tell what goes on between two males from tv shows and reading fic like this one - you're doing an awesome job!