Comments | suzanne78: And So It Began.... Part Thirteen (Kyle/Oliver, R)

suzanne78

And So It Began.... Part Thirteen (Kyle/Oliver, R)

Nov 16, 2009 09:14

Fandom: One Life to Live
Pairing: Kyle Lewis/Oliver Fish, in college
Rating: PG-13 up to Part Nine; R through Parts Ten and onward.
Summary: Oliver Fish met Kyle Lewis in college. It changed his life forever.
A/N: Still rated R, although the dialogue here's more explicit than anything the boys actually do. And language. All Kyle of course -- ( Read more... )

kyle/fish, one life to live, fanfiction, *slash

Comments 10

jyl22075 November 16 2009, 14:46:11 UTC

I was so excited to see this update! Love this chapter!

suzanne78 November 16 2009, 14:54:27 UTC

Thanks! Getting a bit of a small break from Teh Smut, and it comes back full force!

Glad you're enjoying this!

jyl22075 November 16 2009, 17:50:54 UTC

I just love the whole story!! Brilliant job!! Suzanne I read the whole story on weekend and was speechless!! Sorry I have no account right now because I don´t know how to do it... Stop laughing I know I´m a little blond... Okay!! Thank you and can´t wait for next chapter!! PLEASE hurry up!!

suzanne78 November 19 2009, 02:42:18 UTC

Aww! Thanks so much for the compliments :-D I've really been pleased with the comments and feedback the story's received. Plus, people start talking about the characters and the storyline on the show, and it really helps me figure out how to write these guys. So the more people speak up, the more I learn.

Heh--you totally remind me of myself when I first opened up an LJ account. I was really confused with the linkage and the cuts and the... well, everything! So, no worries. I wouldn't laugh at ya!

So glad you like this. Thanks again.

gimlicakeshop November 16 2009, 15:47:39 UTC

This was nice.I love how Oliver is slowly figuring out who he is and what he likes. And Kyle is being open to Oliver but still sticking up for himself. Great stuff.

suzanne78 November 19 2009, 02:35:40 UTC

Ah, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

abaylor22 November 17 2009, 04:57:43 UTC

im happy they made up. it's hard for oliver to talk about his fears and to talk through them. He's shy and a bit insecure. maybe a lot even. they are so ying yang and perfect for eachother. Arghhhhhhh... the show and the fan fic is exciting. im always so impatient to see and read more of both.

suzanne78 November 19 2009, 02:35:16 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you're liking this! Thanks!

abaylor22 November 18 2009, 05:15:38 UTC

i realize the next ch is the last. :( You previously mentioned you only wrote 14 chps. Hopefully in the final ch(14) kyle and fish come to an understanding of what their new relationship will consist of. closeted, but they know that they have eyes and hearts only for eachother. nothing will break them apart... or so it goes.

suzanne78 November 19 2009, 02:34:48 UTC

Actually, this is very much going on--it may be around twenty-five to thirty chapters. I didn't mean to make it sound like the next chapter is the last!

Actually, I'm currently working on Part 19. Hopefully, I'll get the next chapter up tomorrow or Friday. And then I can post a couple more over the weekend.

Thanks!