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And So It Began.... Part Fifteen (Kyle Lewis/Oliver Fish, this part R)

Nov 25, 2009 10:19

Fandom: One Life to Live
Rating: R
Pairing: Kyle/Oliver during their college years
Summary: Oliver Fish met Kyle Lewis in college. It changed his life forever

A/N: Rated R for language and sexual situations in the first part of this chapter. Thank you everyone for all your comments and feedback! I really appreciate you supporting this story ( Read more... )

kyle/fish, one life to live, fanfiction, *slash

Comments 4

kishexplicit abaylor22 November 25 2009, 19:03:44 UTC

congrats on gettn over your slight fear/uneasiness of our boys being sexually explicit. and you did this in the opener paragraphhs!!!!

i can't believe griswold didn't hear that conversation between the boys about fish's dream and some of the kisses. Well, if griswold is ok with kyle then he'll be ok with fish being gay. i guess the boys knew that otherwise they wouldn't make themselves so vunerable like that to their roomie.

jyl22075 November 25 2009, 19:25:58 UTC

This was so angsty and so fabulous!

gimlicakeshop November 25 2009, 22:18:24 UTC

Wow. So much good. The opening was a surprise and was nicely done. But, I'm most intrigued with the way you are writing Kyle's back story. It's smart of you to not take what Kyle said about his parents at face value. Very interesting. You covered a lot of emotional ground in this chapter. What a nice way to begin the holiday. Thanks!

anonymous December 2 2009, 04:30:11 UTC

I love love love your series! I sit around constantly checking back to your page to see if there's any new updates! Your writing is fantastic and follows the series exactly how I thought it would! And I REALLY appreciate all the sex scenes - yum!

You should consider also writing the series from Kyle's perspective in college - it would really show off your skills as a writer, plus I think it would be really interesting!