And So It Began.... Part Sixteen (Kyle Lewis/Oliver Fish, this part R)

[suzanne78]

Fandom: One Life to Live
Rating: R
Pairing: Kyle/Oliver during their college years
Summary: Oliver Fish met Kyle Lewis in college. It changed his life forever
A/N: This is the "candle" chapter, as you'll see below. I really like to think that Kyle was so into candles because candles bring him back to this very moment. This chapter is very

Comments

[kat_us]

I think the way you wrote this without resorting to cliched 'anatomy lessons' was just beautiful. Perfectly IC as usual.

I am glad you had the boys 'do the deed'. I find show's having Fish saying "I've never" to Kyle a tad unbelievable. I mean, come on, there they were, two randy college boys, in love and hawt for each other?
*rolls eyes*

kish is real and honest

[abaylor22]

yay!!!! im giddy, though sick with the flu and stuck at home as a result. I wish i could write like this, heck, even think like this. Thankfully there's talented writers like you to make up for my lack of imagination.

So well done. exciting. so real and honest.You made kish real and honest once again. Love how you pulled some details from monday's show and gave it life. no more kish this week, ihear, so i feel as if i didn't miss at least a day/or wed this week of kish. guh, i hope they're on next week.

[jyl22075]

I loved this chapter! Great job. When the show had Oliver say that, I didn't think he meant they never had sex. I just thought he meant that had never done it like that, sort of thought out and with both of them being openly out and basically sober and what not.

[gimlicakeshop]

Beautiful. Good decision to go AU because this makes sense to me.

Awesome

[johnkb]

Just found and read 1-16....this story is great.
I'm soooo lovin this!
Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!