IDF Fic: Something, Not This - Guiding Light - Olivia/Natalia, Olivia/Doris (sort of) - 13+

[suzotchka67]

Here's my contribution to the International Day of Femslash, July 18, 2009

Enjoy!

Comments

[wonkots42]

I really liked this, even if I am completely sad for both of them now. Loved Doris giving Rafe what for. Someone so needs to do that on the show. Preferably several someones.

[suzotchka67]

thank you. I'm glad you liked this, even if it's still kinda sad

and, yeah, i want someone to rip Rafe (and Nat, too, kinda) a new one on the show. and Doris is the perfect candidate for it, imo. especially since seeing the preview for next week, where Rafe does pretty much what he did in my fic, but w/o anyone at Liv's side to call him on it, apparently... :grr:

[kiranerys101]

Thank you for having someone yell at Rafe! And Doris is, of course, a good choice for that.

Brilliant story. One of the reasons I'll be sad to the show go is the unexplored potential the Olivia/Doris friendship has. It's so good for both of them. Thank you for exploring it and for doing it so well.

[suzotchka67]

Aww, thank you! Yeah, I love these two together, as friends or lovers--I don't much care at this point, because I adore all their scenes together. :)

[lazydevil40]

I think that you have captured their friendship perfectly, it could be so sexually charged if not for the Otalia storyline, but as it is it's perfect... love the *ahem* kisses and Doris handing Rafe his ass on a plate was squee worthy... awesome job, love it

[suzotchka67]

Wow, thank you! Yes, I think if Doris didn't know she'd get her l'il heart broken, she'd SO go after Olivia. I'm glad the Dolivia kissing didn't seem to squick anyone :)

and, who doesn't want to kick Rafe's ass, at this point? that was the most fun part for me to write :)

[little_ruby]

okay, that was sad, beautiful, fun and hot. just love it. and I would really like to see these two making out some more, even though all my love is for Otalia...but Doris/Olivia...it has something soo dirty...*lol*

[suzotchka67]

Aww, thank you. I wish we'd gotten to see anything like this btwn them on the show :)

as for more of them making out... i wasn't necessarily planning on a sequel, but there was a small bit that i cut out, that I might do something with, at some point. and that could include a little more of them making out ;)

[little_ruby]

*lol* after writing my comment, I had an idea for them...*g* perhaps I will write it down

and I'd be very excited if you would write this small bit :D

[suzotchka67]

Oh, Do it! write it! (I'm a Dolivia pusher :)

i guess i'll go with mine, as well. i kind of have this 'why are you torturing me?' scene with Doris and Liv in my head now. but i think i might have to finish my Otalia sex scene, first, so i can get that one out of my head. :)

[ladyvictory]

I absolutely adorable this fic. The characterization was spot on, and the story was real. Painful, but good! ^_^

[suzotchka67]

Thank you! I'm glad this rang true, for you. and, yeah, i know it's sad, but so's Liv, atm. and, i think all of Doris' exposure to Otalia (even the happy bits) is kinda killing her, a little, too. so i think it fits where they are.