STOP TRYING TO KILL ME, NANOWRIMO DX

[suzukiblu]

40053 / 50000 words. 80% done!

ganked from askerian (again):

Inspired by Doctor Who's "Turn Left:" Pick one of my stories and tell me a point in the tale that you'd change. Something tiny (e.g. "and then Fay chose silver glitter instead of gold") or big (e.g. "and then Rose was arrested instead of Jack") and I'll tell you how that one difference would

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[hiza_chan]

Porn that doesn't end. (Don't hurt me) Jet fucked Zuko instead. (Or alternatively, Sokka is concerned for Zuko's wellbeing and gets Jet to let Zuko fuck him)

If you don't wanna write porn, I can prompt you something else.

[suzukiblu]

Haha, well, it's not actually a WRITING meme, just a "what if" meme, so I don't really mind asking about porn.

Basically Jet topping Zuko would not have ended well in that scenario, considering how incredibly pissed off he was. Also how much of a dick he was being. He would've hurt him, probably pretty badly, and Sokka would not have liked that, and the sex would've gotten derailed for violence and then it would just not be a lemon anymore. >:

As for Zuko topping Jet . . . well, that would probably have been pretty hot. >> And Jet's nasty mouth would've been EPIC for it. He likely would've flipped out pretty badly at some point, though, which leads us into a liiittle more violence in our sex than necessary.

[gamiel]

Tigerdillo, Toph and Aang; “I got a knack for fucking everything up" - Toph's child is already born when Aang asks her for help

[suzukiblu]

Actually, that wouldn't have changed anything Toph did--she'd pretty much have had the same realization. Mind, she would've BROUGHT the kid, and Katara would've wanted to baby it so, so bad. Also, probably been jealous of Toph for having it. AANG in fact would've probably been jealous too, because the baby would steal some of the mom!attention Katara'd been giving him.

And Toph would be hilariously badass with a baby strapped to her back while she was kicking Fire Nation ass. Just sayin'. <<

[suzukiblu]

To be fair, I wrote a lot of smutty ones. >> Although it looks like you only have one smutfic on the list anyway. XD

Head To Floor: . . . um. Zuko would be dead. >>;; Literally, if Sokka had not shown up at that exact second Jet would've knifed Zuko in the kidneys and so much for the next Fire Lord, hope the EK doesn't mind the Dragon of the West running the country. I remember being really vividly aware of that when I wrote that part of the scene, to the point where I was like "OH GOD OH GOD I AM GOING TO HAVE TO WRITE JET KILLING ZUKO" annnd then Sokka showed up and I died of relief. I was actually as surprised to see him as Jet was, I honestly thought I was writing a murder scene. >>;;

Avateers: Pretty much exactly what happened in canon when Azula told Ozai that Zuko had killed Aang: he would've been taken back with open arms and everybody at Fire Corp would've gone "YAY THE CRAZY BITCH ISN'T HEIR ANYMORE". Ozai would've taken the ring and probably done some really terrible stuff with it, and Zuko would've been

[lita_of_jupiter]

In Push and Pull what would have happened had Ozai known why Ursa ran?

in Leave the window open if Haru finds out through Aang who the BS really is?

in Baby Mine if Toph said Zuko's name?

[suzukiblu]

Push and Pull: If he knew from the start, Azulon would be dead. Painfully. Probably Li and Lo, too. Probably Ozai would've fucking TORN SHIT APART and then got locked up or banished for killing his Fire Lord (since I assume Iroh would at least kind of understand why he had and not actually want to EXECUTE him) and Iroh would've ended up Fire Lord, and likely been much more effecient than their aged and apparently housebound daddy. They might've wound up winning the war before the Comet ever got there. XD;; SO LUCKY THAT HE DIDN'T, I GUESS.

Although banished!Ozai roaming the world in search of Ursa and their baby would be the most epic thing ever. <3 *prrr* If also potentially the saddest, depending on his success rate.

Leave The Window Open: Assuming you mean that Aang had mentioned it before leaving town, Haru would've probably been a lot more upset about finding the guy on his back porch. Also, a lot less likely to adopt him as a kitty. I imagine a lot more tension would've gone down and they probably wouldn't have

[lita_of_jupiter]

Oooohhh Angsty Ozaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
epic hearts!

Leave the Window : I had actually been thinking around boiling rock actually shen Haru has been pinning for his WT spirit for a while...

and yes that is the one I meant by Baby Mine... couldn`t find it to make sure that was the title XD

[suzukiblu]

That's not something from the actual story, that'd be more a sequel thing. So it wouldn't have changed anything! XD

As for Baby . . . you know, this one I really don't know. Ursa would've dropped her teacup with a horrified expression and the story would've cut off THERE, likely. Part of the hit of the whole horrible concept was that cut off before you see her full reaction, I feel, because it leaves the possibility that she reacted badly. The pretty LIKELY possibility that she reacted badly.

[lita_of_jupiter]

BTW, I can so never resist Push and Pull so one more...

what if the boys had opened their totem bags?

[suzukiblu]

That would pretty much depend on when they opened them. If they opened them as little kids (assuming they were little kids old enough to know what they MEANT, that is), Kya and Hakoda and Bato would've probably had to explain the concept of "adoption" and also the concept of "BIG FREAKING SECRET". If they'd opened them after Kya's death, Hakoda and Bato might've lied or Lanook might've freaked out. If they'd opened them in S1, a LOT of freaking out would've happened, and a lot of angsty confusion due to lack of family around to explain.