1st Fanfic ever! (it probably sucks lol)

Jan 24, 2012 00:04

Title: Doesn't have one yet :)
Author: svetria
Genre: Romance? Unrequited Love :P
Pairing: Yamada Ryosuke x OC
Summary: Yama-chan falls for the girl of his dreams (literally) but she has no interest in him (yet). :D
Notes: It's almost 12am and i just wrote this for fun, it might get better it might not xP but i hope you enjoy this unedited fluff :)

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yamada ryosuke, unrequited love, fanfic, yay

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sannahkhan January 24 2012, 08:57:02 UTC
Ooohhh. this is good! Write more! Why did he randomly go into this random girl's house? I want to knoooowwwwww!!! :D
quick spelling error: He immediately stood* up

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svetria January 25 2012, 03:03:34 UTC
OMG THANK YOU!!! I freaking adore you jahsfgks
I'll write more when i get the time so... this weekend maybe?
Thanks for telling me too! i looked at it for a while and i didn't realize i wrote 'stoop' instead of 'stood' lol xD

lol ok *confession* It was really late at night and he was supposed to say it was his house and i had a whole story for it and what not (she was an exchange student lol) but when i read your comment about him going into a random girl's house randomly made me think and i thought it was a much better idea so i need to rewrite the story in my head but thank you i can do so much with this too!
I hope you don't mind me using it since it was technically your idea xP

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sannahkhan January 25 2012, 04:13:11 UTC
oh. lolll I don't mind you using it.. but I think your original idea sounds better? Well.. it's all in the way you write it.
I shall look forward to whichever you write! :p

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svetria January 25 2012, 05:07:39 UTC
well now i'm not sure what to write... i guess the exchange one 'cause you like it better and i already have a bunch of stories for that one hahaha thanks for your input :D
BTW i changed it so that it would fit. it's the original again except i actually hit enter this time lol now you can see the difference between what she says and what he says. if you want to read the changes only it's just that one part that where she's all like i should be asking that!

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hi_chew_galore January 25 2012, 23:37:18 UTC
OHMYGOSH SO CUTE <33333333

WRITE NEXT CHAPTERRRR~

PLEASE~ XD SO FRICKEN EXCITEDDDD

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svetria January 26 2012, 00:18:29 UTC
o_O SANKYUUU~~!!! Well this week is an eventful week filled with a lot of things to do so i'll do it this weekend xD probably sunday the latest :P
anyways thanks a lot for reading! and thanks a lot for liking it! this is weird but i'm excited about what might happen next too lol
i write it on the spot and then post it so right now i have no idea what happens next lol xD

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hi_chew_galore January 26 2012, 00:30:18 UTC
LOLLL~

HEHEHEHE take your time on the fanfic

we are all busy these days ahahahah

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svetria January 27 2012, 06:24:48 UTC
yes, thanks for your patience i'll update soon... xD

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galarxn January 28 2012, 20:44:45 UTC
Awww ! I like it! Is't great!
Now I can't wait for your next fanfic ;;)

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svetria January 29 2012, 03:41:31 UTC
lol you mean the next chapter? yeah i think tomorrow xP

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