Yesterday (and Forever) [2/2]

[swabluu]

Title: Yesterday (and Forever)
Fandom: BAP
Genre: Angst, TimeStop!AU
Rating: R
Warnings: Youngjae dying a lot ._.
Pairing: Daejae
Summary: Until Youngjae comes back, Daehyun’s stuck in the past, because every day becomes yesterday.

Comments

[shanwens]

SPOT SPOT SPOT i will read this this weekend and Cry A Lot bc BLUU WROTE A THING!!!!!

[swabluu]

omg i actually wrote this in june and posted on aff but was too lazy to post it on lj ;___;

[kathlynwolf]

THIS.FIC.IS.ABSOLUTELY.BREATHTAKING.

I love you and I love the way you wrote it. IDK what more there is to say about this perfection.

[swabluu]

;_______________; omg i feel really honored ;_____; whaa thank you so much! >

[dddaehyun]

this is really beautifully written, oh my god.

the symbolism, the phrasing, it all fits so well around the underlying message of the story, "be honest before it's too late"~ especially every time when daehyun cuts himself off from voicing his feelings only to have something horrible to happen... i also really like your choice of words, utterly stunning, holy shit!
also... i'm really happy to find a rare sad story with a happy ending! i mean happy fluff is nice and angsty stories with a sad ending are good to read once in a while too but i really love stories with struggles and pains and hardships, characters with flaws, that eventually overcome their fears and finally get their happy ending~ it kind of feels more real, idk.
okay i'm flailing a bit, long story short...

this story had me on the edge of my seat and i really loved reading it bc it's amazingly written and just A+ omg thank you for this, really~

[swabluu]

asdjflkajfklasjflasdfj omg but this is like a lot of word vomit and /o\

but cry thank you so much o m g and yes happy endings!! i told myself i had to write at least one story in which there was a happy ending (although i guess killing youngjae three times made up for that??) and TT TT i get an A+ omg thank you <3

[dddaehyun]

idk i'm sorry i get excited over great fics and in my head it's just "trdtfzgujh awesome oiugkhl yes perfect thfjgkuh i love" but i decided to try putting it into somewhat coherent sentences you get me omg

also i mean you might've killed him three times but in the end he gets to live AND live with daehyun so i mean i would die three times for that too tbh *coughcough* just kidding but ugh i don't mind that you killed him idk the end justifies the means? it was a perfect plot so yes many many A+ for you :D

[swabluu]

ahhhhhhh omg yes i totally get you like incoherent sentences are the best tho because of their incoherentness okay i'm becoming incoherent myself adklfjalsf;ajflajflasjfasjfd gah

yes okay end justifies the means yes sEE that means i can kill him some more right ahem
A+ is good c: hehe thank you so much!! <333

[youngjae]

I read this originally on AFF, and was completely blown away. I love how you use such a metaphorically approach to your fic, all the different ways youngjae dies, and how it emphasizes the consequences of daehyun's insecurity/fear of his own feelings, it was seriously amazing.

Especially the last parts “Say it again,” Youngjae murmurs into Daehyun’s ear, so Daehyun does, when he’s sucking off Youngjae and the roar of rushing blood is loud in his ears, when he’s kissing Youngjae so hard it hurts. I love you, over and over again, bringing them into some sort of completeness, some sort of unity, some sort of truth.

I need to re-read it cause I read this a while back. BUT yay! I loved it.

[swabluu]

whaa thank you so much for all your praise! i feel really honored and ;__;

[yoonsuks]

BLUU I JUST READ THIS??????!?!?!?!?!
wow you really had this hobby to kill your characters

and this is just so beautifully written
how
i just don't understand
the words you used
are all perfect

bye i'll just give you an A+++++ for this fic

[swabluu]

oh my god hihihihihihiihihihihihihihi yes i have this amazing hobby of killing my characters C: but no one seems to ever appreciate it ;___;

TT TT A+++++ is always good homg but not sure if this fic + my word vomit deserves an A+++++ but homg thank you so much <333333