breathe and fall (into place)

[swabluu]

title: breathe and fall (into place)
rating: pg-13
pairing: baekyeol/baekhan
genre: angst????? maybe????? idk lol
warnings: character death, mentions of suicide
length: 5.8K words
summary: the only problem is luhan forgot to take chanyeol away from baekhyun’s memories.

Comments

[pikachancalok]

i can't function properly atm. coz the tears blurring my sight and listening to counting crows - colorblind was not a good choice, sobs.

this is perfection. thank you for writing:)

[swabluu]

SCREAMS SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS!!!
COLORBLIND WAS THE INSPIRATION FOR THIS!!
DID YOU GET MY COFFEE BLACK REFERENCE HEHEHE!!
SOMEONE GETS MY REFERENCES IT MAKES ME HAPPY!!

omg you are perfection sobs thank you ;; <3

[wookiescookie]

omg all my feeelssss. i super ship baekyeol, but baekhan always has a special place in my heart
this was wonderfully written really, i love how it's very realistic where luhan tries to figure out what he is to baekhyun
while baek tries to 'keep' both luhan and chanyeol
and gaaahhhh just all my feels
i love the way the baekyeol is integrated with the baekhan too
also i just cant help but wonder the story behind chanyeol;; the phrase the saddest people smile the brightest made me cry

this was such a wonderful read, memming for the future hahaha
thank you!!! <33

[swabluu]

all my feels for your userpic omg ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

but omg thank you so much omg omg omg omg
it's a sad story );

MEMMING SHRIEKS CRIES THANK YOU I FEEL SO HONORED <333333

[next_punk]

it hurt me in such a beautiful way i can't even express it. i really loved this and how past and present met in this fic, and the dreamy sense to it and the puzzle pieces falling together and everything.

[swabluu]

;;;;;;;;;;; omg thank you so much ;;;;;;;;;;;;; <3

[rottencunt]

I think I love you. Really. I feel like crying and I feel weird because I don't usually feel like crying when I'm reading things (?) This is just so sad and beautiful and everything.
I didn't know Achromatopsia exists. It's interesting to read about these kind of things, I like it. I loved when Baek explains to Luhan how is seeing the world in color.
Actually I loved every single word you wrote. Why is this so perfect omg ;-;
Sorry, my comment is so random (?) but it's almost 4 am and I'm really bad at writing english and FEELINGS.

Thank you for writing and sharing this ♥

[swabluu]

omg love confession ;~; cries don't cry omg ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

and yes! someone understands my colorblindness aspect thing idek what i'm trying to say here lol but omgggggg this is not perfect you are perfect sobs ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

WHY ARE YOU AWAKE AT 4AM GO TO SLEEP SHISUS ><

thank you for reading a commenting omg this is such a sweet, beautiful comment ♥ /squishes you

[baekzilla]

I'M FUCKING CRYING OH MY GOD THIS IS SO PERFECT I JUST

SCREAMING

baekyeol and baekhan are my top two baek otps crieeeeeees
and this was so sad and so sweet at the same time and really
well written and i just ughhghglsdkjgf i actually cried okay :'(

this was so good man i'm still not over it sobs

[swabluu]

OH MY GOSH CRIES PLS OMG T_________T