Title: Blue Like Jazz Rating: PG-13 Genre: Fluff, Petshop!au Pairing: Baekxing/Sexing Length: ~6K Summary: It wasn't really as much letting go as it was learning to love again.
ajldksjflajdflajfldkasjfla ahhh omg thank you so much cries this isn't incoherent it's really lovely omg long comments are my fave <3
wahasdklfjaldfjlajdf i'm really glad i wrote something that fitted what you wanted like it was actually really difficult for me to make it as cute and fluffy as i could because i suck at fluff TT TT but o m g
and sad yixing omg yeafjlasdjf;ladfjaslfjcfaldfj;asdfjasfj all the amazing things are because of chels's betaing tho ;; but adjfkladfjalf ahhh cries
squeals softly into my pillow!!! thank you so much for the spot bb :')
but anywaaay i've said most of this in my beta email, but i'll reiterate them again here - this fic is so... aesthetically pretty in my head?? i mean, somehow, as i read through the story, the images that unfold in my head move along with it. the change of seasons in the background, the change of hair and outfits, basically the flowing of time is so apparent here and i attribute that to your fantastic month distribution thing ♥ i really loved the way you formatted this and the pacing was just nice! *v* a-and i can imagine the soft way baekhyun looks at a pet s o b like in the beautiful teaser with the dog and and--------------- /lies down ;;;;;;
i found myself rooting for baekxing like i would in dramas lmao i'm like no u douchebag oh sehun get away or cmonnnnnnn c'//monnnnn// now kiss already hnghfhghfhghfff orz.
all in all, great stuff and it was a honour getting to beta for you! c: here's a sehun icon bc you love his face hehe (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧
bluu, this is beautiful ;u; the imagery and the overall tone of the story and how it isn't really chronological and yet it still has a nice flow to it, eep /o\
Ahhh, Bluu, this is really good! I really liked how you described Yixing's past relationship with Sehun and how he got himself a kitten just to remind him of that. The entire fic flowed really nicely and I loved the imagery too, especially at the ending!
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wahasdklfjaldfjlajdf i'm really glad i wrote something that fitted what you wanted like it was actually really difficult for me to make it as cute and fluffy as i could because i suck at fluff TT TT but o m g
and sad yixing omg yeafjlasdjf;ladfjaslfjcfaldfj;asdfjasfj all the amazing things are because of chels's betaing tho ;; but adjfkladfjalf ahhh cries
ajsdlkfjakfjasf <3
this is a really incoherent reply omg sorry xD
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but anywaaay i've said most of this in my beta email, but i'll reiterate them again here - this fic is so... aesthetically pretty in my head?? i mean, somehow, as i read through the story, the images that unfold in my head move along with it. the change of seasons in the background, the change of hair and outfits, basically the flowing of time is so apparent here and i attribute that to your fantastic month distribution thing ♥ i really loved the way you formatted this and the pacing was just nice! *v* a-and i can imagine the soft way baekhyun looks at a pet s o b like in the beautiful teaser with the dog and and--------------- /lies down ;;;;;;
i found myself rooting for baekxing like i would in dramas lmao i'm like no u douchebag oh sehun get away or cmonnnnnnn c'//monnnnn// now kiss already hnghfhghfhghfff orz.
all in all, great stuff and it was a honour getting to beta for you! c: here's a sehun icon bc you love his face hehe (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧
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cries jaldsfjlasjdflajflafjalfalf falls over ahh omg dramas xDDD but cries SEHUN ICON NOT OKAY
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i enjoyed reading this, okay ♥
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thank you so much ;;
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Thanks for writing! <333
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