the anti-haiku haiku

Jan 31, 2005 19:25

haikus really suck.
how much can you say in se-
venteen syllables?

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blackbird_fly January 31 2005, 19:42:09 UTC
Haha. I had to write a haiku today about something I use everyday. Guess what it was? Yup. My iPod.

On my morning ride,
The music it has inside
Makes me feel relaxed.

Now how lame is that one?

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moolorie February 1 2005, 17:15:19 UTC
haha!! i approve!

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