And the Greatest of These... 4/7 (Gen, PG-13)
And the Greatest of These...
by Swanseajill
Chapter Four
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Finding Sam was the easy part. Late that evening, Dean simply called his cell. He told him he was at Bobby’s, had been thinking things over, and wanted to meet up the following day. He let Sam choose the meeting place - a popular diner on the outskirts of Barberville, a small town just an ( Read more... )
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The pain was making him nauseated, and while the Tylenol he’d taken less than an hour ago had done little to take the edge off, he couldn’t afford to dull his senses by taking anything stronger.
Poor, hurting Dean!
He looked away casually and smiled at the middle-aged waitress. “Hi there… Betty.
I really like the detail about Dean using the waitress’ name.
I’ll take a large coffee, black, and a large cappuccino with some of those sprinkly chocolate things on the top for my brother.”
Good detail here, too, with Dean trying hard to seem normal by poking fun at Sam’s taste in coffee drinks.
“What happened was between the two of us, Sam. I trust Bobby, but that doesn’t mean he has to know all our business.”
Very good dialogue. There are definitely some things the brothers would keep to themselves, and Dean’s smart to play that up here with Sam.
Sam frowned. “You still don’t get it, do you? It’s obvious I’ve been given these ( ... )
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