Fools Rush In 1/1 (PG, Gen, Humor)

[swanseajill]

 Title:  Fools Rush In
Author:  Swanseajill
Characters:  Dean, Sam

Pairing:  None

Words:  2,632
Spoilers:  None

Disclaimer:  Don’t own them, making no money from them.

Summary:  The boys hunt a legendary monster in the swamps of Louisiana.  Will Dean’s desire to get the job finished quickly land him in more trouble than he’d bargained for?

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[iamstealthyone]

I love this fic, dear! Great narrative voice, and so much wonderful humor. I love Sam being snarky and “I told you so.”

Well done!

Favorite lines:

You rocked the table.”

“And you spilled a whole mug of coffee over Dad’s journal.”

Sam glared some more. “Yeah. Because you rocked the table.”

LOL! I love their bickering here.

"You’re so right. Who needs food when they can have Nancy? That girl’s totally edible."

Dean’s such a horndog. *g*

“Man!” Dean said. “Was that a Wookie?”

Yup. A Wookie. That was it.

LOL! I love him being all snarky. I can totally picture his face here.

Big? Check. Slimy? Check. Ugly? Double check. Stupid? Too soon to tell.

*snickers*

“Stain your skin green?” Dean thundered. A large glob of slime dripped off his face and plopped wetly onto the ground below, leaving a decidedly green streak behind.

I love this image!

“Maybe you can get Nancy to do the scrubbing,” Sam suggested helpfully.*snickers* Sam’s enjoying himself immensely, and I don’t blame him. Dean really did ask for it

[swanseajill]

Hey there! Thanks for taking time to comment after all the hard work you've done on the story already. Glad the humor works for you - it's so much harder to write than angst!

[fredsmith518]

Poor Dean, but I guess he earned it. Very easy to picture and smell...

(Are you actually in Swansea? I ask, nosy question, because my other half is driving there today.)

[swanseajill]

Thanks for the comments. Glad you enjoyed it. No, I'm not actually in Swansea, but I was brought up there, hence the name. I'm in Cardiff - not far away.

[hiyacynth]

iamstealthyone sent me a link/rec combo to this, but I've been really behind in my reading lately. So glad I decided to try to catch up! This was hysterical. I love poor Hulk!Dean at the end. And, yeah, Sam should make this last; it's too sweet not to.

Thanks for the pick-me-up! Great work!

[swanseajill]

Glad I'm not the only one who's way behind in their reading. Thanks very much for the comment, I'm very glad you found it funny. I'm much more used to writing angst than humor, so I'm always a bit worried that my attempts at humor don't quite come off!