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Almost Heart Attack

Jul 20, 2011 02:30

Title: Almost Heart Attack
Author sweatnitemare
Rating: G
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Minho
Summary: Minho got way too nervous.

( Suddenly, Minho breathed heavily. He detached himself from Jinki and started to gasp for air. His hands trembled frantically while his heart beats loud and fast like an angry drumbeat. )

pairing: onew/minho, !fanfic, rating: g, author: s

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oconje October 5 2011, 16:03:25 UTC

A few grammatical errors but I really liked this, so sweet! Please keep up on Onho!

sweatnitemare October 5 2011, 16:07:04 UTC

thanks for pointing out. i haven't been writing in awhile and it's not beta-ed. thank you for reading my fics!!!

<3 really appreciate it.

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