A second chance chapter one

[sweden_girl25]

heres the next chapter of my story

Comments

[wildkatblue]

I like it. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

[sweden_girl25]

thanks I will post more in about a week when my beta comes back from her trip, and i am gonna change that nickname as people said it was too much oc

[firebolt1982]

It's good ... although I don't like the sortening of Hermione to 'Mina' but that's just a personal thing! *lol*

Can't wait to see what happens next ...

[sweden_girl25]

*lol* I already decided to change that nickname as some people said it was odd so I am gonna change it i just tried it for short but tis much better with just her own name

[firebolt1982]

I've never been keen in nicknames for any of the characters (unless they're canon) but that's just a personal thing. Everyone's different. So feel free to write whatever you like cos it's your story!

[sweden_girl25]

I was just trying soem thigns with the first chapter but I am gonna keep hermione as the name, my beta is away on a trip this week but wil lsend the chapter to her and she wil lmail it back when she returns

[rleonc]

Liked it, liked it, liked it :D Just one thing, don't say Mina so much, it gets tireing after a while. Can't wait to see how this came to happen and how it'll end. Keep it up and happy writing!

[sweden_girl25]

yeah I decided to change Mina to her real name isntead so wont be using that for the other chapters was just trying out a thing, my beta is away this week so more wil lcome soon glad you like it