Okay, so I love this one. It's beautiful. Your imagery is absolutely lovely. You put in words that I would never, ever had associated with your subject, and they work amazingly well. "Sensual chills" just took me by surprise, but I love it.
see, I actually don't like this poem, mostly because it feels aimless and I don't like the title (give me one and I will love you forever). also because I write too many poems about bobbing around in swimming pools.
but compliments from you are not something I take lightly, so thank you. <3
Hmmm..I thought the title was rather cute, but let me think. Well, we could take a cue from my french classes and title it "eau benite" which is french for holy water...Um...Amphitrite might work. Greek mythology- daughter of the Old man of the sea, Posiedon's wife...that might work. Thetis is basically the same thing, except she's achilles' mother, so whichever one sounds better I guess. I'll keep thinking.
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but compliments from you are not something I take lightly, so thank you. <3
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