Nodding Off

Jul 29, 2012 23:02

Title: Nodding Off
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Word Count: 932
Rating: T
Note: Written for day thirteen of watsons_woes July Writing Prompts
Summary - John gets an accidental introduction to heroin.

Nodding Off )

sherlock

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donutsweeper July 30 2012, 03:29:06 UTC
Wow, John's experiences here and POV are really well done, you manage to let us see Sherlock's worry and responses muted through John's drugged experience. Very well done!

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sweet_chi July 30 2012, 11:21:36 UTC
Thanks so much!

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Sunday, 29 July 2012 livejournal July 30 2012, 04:38:38 UTC
User thisprettywren referenced to your post from Sunday, 29 July 2012 saying: [...] by (Mycroft | PG | BBC) Nodding Off [...]

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thesmallhobbit July 30 2012, 07:52:36 UTC
Poor John, I did enjoy the way he tried to make sense of things and floated around.

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sweet_chi July 30 2012, 11:23:54 UTC
Poor John, indeed. :( Thanks for reading!

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bugeyedmonster July 31 2012, 01:56:22 UTC
Poor John.

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sweet_chi July 31 2012, 03:15:41 UTC
Such is the beauty of the watsons_woes community. Lots of "poor John" to go around. :P

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calli_scribbles August 2 2012, 03:16:18 UTC
And extra in July. :)

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azuhra August 5 2012, 01:32:23 UTC
Well, that quick end to a chase didn't work out so well. Rather, I suppose it did, neither the drug dealer or John went very far afterwords O.o

The perspective used in the writing of this piece was marvelous! John drugged is still primarily John, just ah... drugged. The evil tormentor in me would love a follow up story, or some kind of with drawl response.

The rest of me is perfectly happy with this though!

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sweet_chi August 5 2012, 01:48:17 UTC
I actually might do a follow up for one of the prompts I have left. I'll have to do some research on heroin (fun times...)and see if it sparks the muse's interest. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading (and for taking the time to leave so many kind comments). :)

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