Veronica Mars Ficlet

[sweet_like_choc]

Title: Wings
Author: sweet_like_choc
Pairing/Character: Lilly, Ensemble
Word Count: 885
Rating: PG: 13 (for one bad word)
Summary: Lilly flew…
Spoilers/Warnings: Up to 1X22 Leave it to Beaver. No Season 2

Comments

[solaris_burning]

Wow I loved it! Great images of Logan having his wings clipped and him accepting Veronica's wings.

My only problem is that Lilly is spelled with two ls.

[sweet_like_choc]

Hee I just noticed this and fixed it!

Thank you- I'm glad you liked :)

[moirariordan]

Beautiful. I especially love the last line: "She was Lilly Kane and she flew." Awesome job.

[wisdomeagle]

[here from vm_navigator]

Wow. This is amazing in a way that it really shouldn't be. The image should be silly, but it's not. It's just so true to who Lilly is and what Neptune is and God, Lilly flies. Lilly's always been able to fly. I love Jake crying over it and Logan's wings being ripped off; I just... This is the very best use of metaphor. Seriously.

Typo: Lilly had watched her get smaller and smaller as the smile on her fact grew larger and larger. Should be face?